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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 15, 2023

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If I Were Rich

If I were rich enough, seem to have got an unlimited credit card.

I would tell other people that money is just a number, it would not be so important to anyone, and don't risk your health for wealth.
I'd also try to keep a normal life like before, but as time passed, I might not have been able to resist the lure of the erotic beauties. There is a famous saying, that even heroes or warriors can be seduced by beautiful women.

Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory trying to find ways to live as longer as possible. These things have been testified to what emperors have been doing over thousands in many many countries. However, no one succeeds.

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If I were rich enough, seem toit would seem as though I haved got an unlimited credit card.

I would tell other people that money is just a number,; it would not be so important to anyone, and don't risk your health for wealth.

Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory trying to find ways to live as longer as possible.

These things have been testified to what emperors have been doing over thousands of years in many many countries.

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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 17, 2023

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Thank you very much for your time and corrections!

If I were rich enough, seem to have gotit would be like having an unlimited credit card.

Using "be like" instead of "seem" is more common when explaining a hypothetical or future situation. "Seem" is more common when talking about the present.

I would tell other people that money is just a number, it wouldis not be so important to anyone, and do, and you shouldn't risk your health for wealth.

I'd also try to keep a normal life like before, b. But as time passed, I might not have beenbe able to resist the lure of the erotic beauties.

There is a famous saying, that e, "Even heroes or warriors can be seduced by beautiful women."

Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory, trying to find ways to live as longer as possible.

These things have been testifiedare a testament to what emperors have been doing over thousands of years in many, many countries.

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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 16, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections!

If I Were Rich

If I were rich enough, seem to hI would ave gotten an unlimited credit card.

I would tell other people that money is just a number, it would not be so important to anyone/others, and don't risk youtheir health for wealth.

I'd also try to keep a normal life like before, but as time passed, I might not have been able to resist the lure of the erotic beauties.

There is a famous saying, that e"Even heroes or warriors can be seduced by beautiful women."

Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory tryingin order to find ways to live as longer as possible.

These things have been testified to what emperors have been doing over thousands in many manyof years in different countries.

However, no one succeeds/have succeeded yet.

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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 16, 2023

1

Thank you for your corrections!

If I Were Rich

If I were rich enough, seem to have gotit would seem like I had an unlimited credit card.

I would tell other people that moneythe amount of money you had is just a number, it wshould not be so important to aneveryone, and don'to not risk your health for wealth.

"money" is never a "number". The amount of money you have is just a number. I would understand what you meant, but this sounds a bit better.

I'd also try to keep a normal life like before, but as time passed, I might not have beenbe able to resist the lure of the erotic beauties.

There is a famous saying, that says: 'even heroes or warriors can be seduced by beautiful women'.

Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory trying to find ways to live as longer as possible.

These things have been testified to what emperors have been doing over thousands of years in many many countries.

However, no one succeeds.

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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 16, 2023

1

Thank you for your corrections!

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If I Were Rich

If I were rich enough, seem to have gotit would seem like I had an unlimited credit card.

I would tell other people that money is just a number, that it wshould not be so important to anyone, and don'tnot to risk your health for wealth.

I'd also try to keep a normal life like before, but as time passed, I might not have beenbe able to resist the lure of the erotic beauties.

There is a famous saying, that even heroes or warriors can be seduced by beautiful women.

Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory trying to find ways to live as longer as possible.

These things have been testified to what emperors have been doing for over thousands of years in many, many countries.

However, no one succeeds.

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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 16, 2023

1

Thank you for your corrections!

If I Were Rich


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If I were rich enough, seem to have got an unlimited credit card.


If I were rich enough, seem to have gotit would seem like I had an unlimited credit card.

If I were rich enough, seem to have gotit would seem like I had an unlimited credit card.

If I were rich enough, seem to hI would ave gotten an unlimited credit card.

If I were rich enough, seem to have gotit would be like having an unlimited credit card.

Using "be like" instead of "seem" is more common when explaining a hypothetical or future situation. "Seem" is more common when talking about the present.

If I were rich enough, seem toit would seem as though I haved got an unlimited credit card.

I would tell other people that money is just a number, it would not be so important to anyone, and don't risk your health for wealth.


I would tell other people that money is just a number, that it wshould not be so important to anyone, and don'tnot to risk your health for wealth.

I would tell other people that moneythe amount of money you had is just a number, it wshould not be so important to aneveryone, and don'to not risk your health for wealth.

"money" is never a "number". The amount of money you have is just a number. I would understand what you meant, but this sounds a bit better.

I would tell other people that money is just a number, it would not be so important to anyone/others, and don't risk youtheir health for wealth.

I would tell other people that money is just a number, it wouldis not be so important to anyone, and do, and you shouldn't risk your health for wealth.

I would tell other people that money is just a number,; it would not be so important to anyone, and don't risk your health for wealth.

I'd also try to keep a normal life like before, but as time passed, I might not have been able to resist the lure of the erotic beauties.


I'd also try to keep a normal life like before, but as time passed, I might not have beenbe able to resist the lure of the erotic beauties.

I'd also try to keep a normal life like before, but as time passed, I might not have beenbe able to resist the lure of the erotic beauties.

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I'd also try to keep a normal life like before, b. But as time passed, I might not have beenbe able to resist the lure of the erotic beauties.

There is a famous saying, that even heroes or warriors can be seduced by beautiful women.


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There is a famous saying, that says: 'even heroes or warriors can be seduced by beautiful women'.

There is a famous saying, that e"Even heroes or warriors can be seduced by beautiful women."

There is a famous saying, that e, "Even heroes or warriors can be seduced by beautiful women."

Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory trying to find ways to live as longer as possible.


Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory trying to find ways to live as longer as possible.

Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory trying to find ways to live as longer as possible.

Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory tryingin order to find ways to live as longer as possible.

Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory, trying to find ways to live as longer as possible.

Then I would also invest in a pharmaceutical factory trying to find ways to live as longer as possible.

These things have been testified to what emperors have been doing over thousands in many many countries.


These things have been testified to what emperors have been doing for over thousands of years in many, many countries.

These things have been testified to what emperors have been doing over thousands of years in many many countries.

These things have been testified to what emperors have been doing over thousands in many manyof years in different countries.

These things have been testifiedare a testament to what emperors have been doing over thousands of years in many, many countries.

These things have been testified to what emperors have been doing over thousands of years in many many countries.

However, no one succeeds.


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However, no one succeeds/have succeeded yet.

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