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nickolay

Sept. 25, 2020

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If I had 10% better memory, I could gain more knowledge.

I think, good memory one of the important parts of learning. For learn languages, you need to have a constant vocabulary. If you have 10% better memory you can understand 10% information more. For one sentence 10 % equal approximately to one word. Sometimes one word is not enoung to understand sentence more clearly. I think we can improve our memory if we will be training it. I think leaning something by heart is a good approach to improve your memory.
When I had enough time, it was before the birthday of my son I was memorizing at home a song and repeating it when I was driving a car. It was a good experience to memorizing new words and training of pronunciation. I interrupted this practice but, I think, I will continue it in the near future.

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I think, having a good memory is one of the most important partselement of learning.

ForIn order to learn new languages, you need to have a constantly improve your vocabulary.

If you have 10% better memory you can understand 10%r memory was 10% better, you could retain 10% more information more.

For onIn an average sentence, 10 % equals to approximately to one word.

Sometimes one word is not enoungh to understand a sentence more clearly.

I think we can improve our memory if we will be training it.train ourselves to improve our memory.

I think leaning something by heart is a good approach to improve your memory.For example, a good approach is to learn something by heart.

When I had enough time, it was bBefore the birthday of my son, I washad more time. I memorizied a song at home a song and repeatinged it wheneven while I was driving ain my car.

It was a good experienccise to memorizinge new words and tpraining ofctice my pronunciation.

I interrupted this practiceFor some reason, I stopped doing this, but, I think, I will continue it in the near future.

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Good luck

I think, that a good memory is one of the most important parts of learning.

For learning languages, you need to have a constantlarge vocabulary.

I wan't really sure what you meant be "constant", but I tried to correct it as best as I could.

If you have 10% better memory, you can understand 10% more information more.

For one sentence, 10 % is equal to approximately to one word.

Sometimes, one word is not enoungh to understand a sentence more clearlyer.

I think we can improve our memory if we will be training it.

I think learning something by heart is a good approach tofor improveing your memory.

When I had enough time, it was before the birthday of my sonbefore my son's birthday, I was memorizing at home a song song at home and repeating it whilen I was driving a car.

It was a good experience to memorizing new words and training ofed my pronunciation.

I interruptedstopped doing this practice but, I think, I will continuerestart it in the near future.

Feedback

Great Job! Just a few corrections!

If I had a 10% better memory, I could gain more knowledge.

I think, good memory is one of the important parts of learning.

ForWhen learning languages, you need to have a constant vocabulary.

If you have a 10% better memory, you can understand 10% more information more.

For one sentence 10 % equal approximately to one wordOne word is approximately 10% of a sentence.

Sometimes onknowing one more word is not enoungh to understand a sentence more clearly.

I think we can improve our memory if we will beby training it.

I think learning something by heart is a good approach to improveing your memory.

When I had enough time, it was before the birthday of my sonBefore my son's birthday, when I had enough time, I was memorizing songs at home a song and repeating ithem when I was driving a car.

It was a good experience topractice memorizing new words and training ofmy pronunciation.

I interrupted this practice but, I think, I will continue it in the near futureThis practice has been interrupted, but, I think, I will restart it soon.

"in the near future" is quite wordy, so I replaced it with "soon"

I think, that good memory is one of the most important parts of learning.

Given the title and the rest of the text, I assume you wanted to say that it is the most important thing.
The sentence is correct without it as well though.

ForYou need to have a large amount of vocabulary to learn a languages, y

Y
ou need to have a constant vocabularystream of new vocabulary to learn a language.

Depending on what you wanted to say.

If you have 10% bettermore memory you can understand 10% more information more.

ForGiven one sentence, 10 % equal approximately equals to one word.

I think that the sentence is still wrong but I actually do not know how to correct this one. I feel that the `to` is off...

Sometimes one word is not enoungh to understand a sentence more clearly.

I think we can improve our memory if we will be training it.

I think leanMemorizing something by heart is a good approach to improveis a great way to train your memory.

When I had enough time, itwhich was before themy sons birthday of my son, I was memorizing at homethe lyrics of a song and repeating it when I was driving athem while I drove my car.

It was a good experience to memorizinge new words and training of. It also helped with pronunciation.

I interruptstopped thiso practice but, I think, I will continue it in the near future.

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Good work!

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johnnyclever

Sept. 25, 2020

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Sometimes one word is not enoungh to understand a sentence more clearly.

Sometimes one word is not *enough* to understand a sentence more clearly.

If I had 10% better memory, I could gain more knowledge.


If I had a 10% better memory, I could gain more knowledge.

I think, good memory one of the important parts of learning.


I think, that good memory is one of the most important parts of learning.

Given the title and the rest of the text, I assume you wanted to say that it is the most important thing. The sentence is correct without it as well though.

I think, good memory is one of the important parts of learning.

I think, that a good memory is one of the most important parts of learning.

I think, having a good memory is one of the most important partselement of learning.

For learn languages, you need to have a constant vocabulary.


ForYou need to have a large amount of vocabulary to learn a languages, y

Y
ou need to have a constant vocabularystream of new vocabulary to learn a language.

Depending on what you wanted to say.

ForWhen learning languages, you need to have a constant vocabulary.

For learning languages, you need to have a constantlarge vocabulary.

I wan't really sure what you meant be "constant", but I tried to correct it as best as I could.

ForIn order to learn new languages, you need to have a constantly improve your vocabulary.

If you have 10% better memory you can understand 10% information more.


If you have 10% bettermore memory you can understand 10% more information more.

If you have a 10% better memory, you can understand 10% more information more.

If you have 10% better memory, you can understand 10% more information more.

If you have 10% better memory you can understand 10%r memory was 10% better, you could retain 10% more information more.

For one sentence 10 % equal approximately to one word.


ForGiven one sentence, 10 % equal approximately equals to one word.

I think that the sentence is still wrong but I actually do not know how to correct this one. I feel that the `to` is off...

For one sentence 10 % equal approximately to one wordOne word is approximately 10% of a sentence.

For one sentence, 10 % is equal to approximately to one word.

For onIn an average sentence, 10 % equals to approximately to one word.

Sometimes one word is not enoung to understand sentence more clearly.


Sometimes one word is not enoungh to understand a sentence more clearly.

Sometimes onknowing one more word is not enoungh to understand a sentence more clearly.

Sometimes, one word is not enoungh to understand a sentence more clearlyer.

Sometimes one word is not enoungh to understand a sentence more clearly.

I think we can improve our memory if we will be training it.


I think we can improve our memory if we will be training it.

I think we can improve our memory if we will be training it.

I think we can improve our memory if we will beby training it.

I think we can improve our memory if we will be training it.train ourselves to improve our memory.

I think leaning something by heart is a good approach to improve your memory.


I think learning something by heart is a good approach tofor improveing your memory.

I think leanMemorizing something by heart is a good approach to improveis a great way to train your memory.

I think learning something by heart is a good approach to improveing your memory.

I think leaning something by heart is a good approach to improve your memory.For example, a good approach is to learn something by heart.

When I had enough time, it was before the birthday of my son I was memorizing at home a song and repeating it when I was driving a car.


When I had enough time, itwhich was before themy sons birthday of my son, I was memorizing at homethe lyrics of a song and repeating it when I was driving athem while I drove my car.

When I had enough time, it was before the birthday of my sonBefore my son's birthday, when I had enough time, I was memorizing songs at home a song and repeating ithem when I was driving a car.

When I had enough time, it was before the birthday of my sonbefore my son's birthday, I was memorizing at home a song song at home and repeating it whilen I was driving a car.

When I had enough time, it was bBefore the birthday of my son, I washad more time. I memorizied a song at home a song and repeatinged it wheneven while I was driving ain my car.

It was a good experience to memorizing new words and training of pronunciation.


It was a good experience to memorizinge new words and training of. It also helped with pronunciation.

It was a good experience topractice memorizing new words and training ofmy pronunciation.

It was a good experience to memorizing new words and training ofed my pronunciation.

It was a good experienccise to memorizinge new words and tpraining ofctice my pronunciation.

I interrupted this practice but, I think, I will continue it in the near future.


I interruptstopped thiso practice but, I think, I will continue it in the near future.

I interrupted this practice but, I think, I will continue it in the near futureThis practice has been interrupted, but, I think, I will restart it soon.

"in the near future" is quite wordy, so I replaced it with "soon"

I interruptedstopped doing this practice but, I think, I will continuerestart it in the near future.

I interrupted this practiceFor some reason, I stopped doing this, but, I think, I will continue it in the near future.

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