June 23, 2022
If I could speak to anybody in English
I'll assume that I could speak with someone that already died.
I would talk with Steve Jobs.
Jobs was a controversial figure, love him or hate him, but you can't ignore him. I know little about his life. I don't agree with some of his decisions, but it's undeniable that he made history.
There's a lot of histories about how he changed the world, my personal favorite is how he changed how we write. In 1975 he took a calligraphy class at Reeds College after dropping out. It wouldn't help him get a degree, but he did any way, because he was intrigued by gorgeous posts in the campus.
In his calligraphy class, he learned how different types of letters changed how we perceive the message. If a doctor has a visit card with a childish, comical or unprofessional font (e.g. Comic Sans), it's hard to take him seriously. After learning the usefulness of calligraphy, he got back to his journey as a entrepreneur. Years later, when the first Macintosh came out, it came with a wide range of fonts to choose from.
The advent of personal printers combined with digital fonts in the Macintosh started a revolution, anyone with a computer and a printer could create their own magazines, books, and posters. The influence of Jobs in typography was subtle, but it revolutionized how we tell our stories. If you are reading this, he changed your life tremendously.
Besides typography and digital printing, he also impacted marketing, product design, technology, innovation, and music. That's why, if I could talk to anyone in English, I would like to speak to Steve Jobs.
"Stay hungry, stay foolish." - Steve Jobs
If you could talk to anyone, who would it be?
Thank you for reading. Have a great day.
Edited:
I'll assume that I could speak with someone that already died.
I would talk with Steve Jobs.
Jobs was a controversial figure, love him or hate him, but you can't ignore him. I know little about his life. I don't agree with some of his decisions, but it's undeniable that he made history.
There's a lot of histories about how he changed the world, my personal favorite is how he changed how we write. In 1975 he took a calligraphy class at Reeds College after dropping out. It wouldn't help him get a degree, but he did any way, because he was intrigued by gorgeous posters in the campus.
In his calligraphy class, he learned how different types of letters change how we perceive the message. If a doctor has a visit card with a childish, comical or unprofessional font (e.g. Comic Sans), it's hard to take him seriously. After learning the usefulness of calligraphy, he got back to his journey as a entrepreneur. Years later, when the first Macintosh came out, it came with a wide range of fonts to choose from.
The advent of personal printers combined with digital fonts in the Macintosh started a revolution, anyone with a computer and a printer could create their own magazines, books, and posters. The influence of Jobs in typography was subtle, but it revolutionized how we tell our stories. If you are reading this, he changed your life tremendously.
Besides typography and digital printing, he also impacted marketing, product design, technology, innovation, and music. That's why, if I could talk to anyone in English, I would like to speak to Steve Jobs.
"Stay hungry, stay foolish." - Steve Jobs
If you could talk to anyone, who would it be?
Thank you for reading. Have a great day.
Edit 2:
[n] numbers inside brackets are notes on the bottom of the page for later reviews. Please, ignore them.
I'll assume that I could speak with someone that has already died.
I would talk with Steve Jobs.
Love him or hate him, Jobs was a controversial figure, yet you couldn't ignore him [1] . I know little about his life. I don't agree with some of his decisions, but it's undeniable that he made history.
There's a lot of histories about how he changed the world, my personal favorite is how he changed how we write. In 1975, he took a calligraphy class at Reeds College after dropping out [2]. It wouldn't help him get a degree, but he did any way, because he was intrigued by gorgeous posters in the campus.
In his calligraphy class, he learned how different types of letters change how we perceive the message. If a doctor has a visit card with a childish, comical or unprofessional font (e.g. Comic Sans), it's hard to take them seriously [3]. After learning the usefulness of calligraphy, he got back to his journey as an entrepreneur [4]. Years later, when the first Macintosh came out, it came with a wide range of fonts to choose from.
The advent of personal printers combined with digital fonts in the Macintosh started a revolution: anyone with a computer and a printer could create their own magazines, books, and posters [5]. The influence of Jobs in typography was subtle, but it revolutionized how we tell our stories. If you are reading this, he changed your life tremendously.
Besides typography and digital printing, he also impacted marketing, product design, technology, innovation, and music. That's why, if I could talk to anyone in English, I would like to speak to Steve Jobs.
"Stay hungry, stay foolish." - Steve Jobs
If you could talk to anyone, who would it be?
Thank you for reading. Have a great day.
[1] Stylistics and the sentence is in the past, so can't should also be.
[2] Introductory phrase of time requires a comma.
[3] Gender neutral is preferable.
[4] Indefinite article before word that start with a vowel must be an.
[5] Explanations work better with a colon than with a comma.
If I could speak to anybody in English
I'll assume that I could speak with someone that has already died.
I would talk with Steve Jobs.
Love him or hate him, Jobs was a controversial figure, love him or hate him, bu yet you caouldn't ignore him.
can't - present tense, needs to be past
I rearranged the structure to make it sound better
I know little about his life.
I don't agree with some of his decisions, but it's undeniable that he made history.
There's a lot of histories about how he changed the world, my personal favorite is how he changed how we write.
In 1975, he took a calligraphy class at Reeds College after dropping out.
It wouldn't help him get a degree, but he did any way, because he was intrigued by gorgeous posts in the campus.
In his calligraphy class, he learned how different types of letters changed how we perceive the message.
If a doctor has a visit card with a childish, comical or unprofessional font (e.g. Comic Sans), it's hard to take hithem seriously.
It's nicer nowadays to not specify the gender of an occupation, to avoid being sexist but that's just a political correctness thing.
After learning the usefulness of calligraphy, he got back to his journey as an entrepreneur.
Years later, when the first Macintosh came out, it came with a wide range of fonts to choose from.
The advent of personal printers combined with digital fonts in the Macintosh started a revolution,: anyone with a computer and a printer could create their own magazines, books, and posters.
the second point is an explanation of the first, so you can use a colon here
it works better than a comma
The influence of Jobs in typography was subtle, but it revolutionized how we tell our stories.
If you are reading this, he changed your life tremendously.
Besides typography and digital printing, he also impacted marketing, product design, technology, innovation, and music.
That's why, if I could talk to anyone in English, I would like to speak to Steve Jobs.
"Stay hungry, stay foolish."
- Steve Jobs
If you could talk to anyone, who would it be?
Thank you for reading.
Have a great day.
June 25, 2022
Oh sorry, I didn't see your editted version.
June 25, 2022
I really liked your post. I didn't know about Steve Job's history, and it's interesting to realise how he's made such an impact on society.
June 25, 2022
Oh sorry, I didn't see your editted version.
That's fine, I just corrected some little details.
You corrections are pretty insightful, they helped me a lot. Thank you for reading and taking the time to correct me. ☻
June 25, 2022
I really liked your post. I didn't know about Steve Job's history, and it's interesting to realise how he's made such an impact on society.
I'm glad you liked it.
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If a doctor has a visit card with a childish, comical or unprofessional font (e.g. Comic Sans), it's hard to take him seriously. If a doctor has a visit card with a childish, comical or unprofessional font (e.g. Comic Sans), it's hard to take It's nicer nowadays to not specify the gender of an occupation, to avoid being sexist but that's just a political correctness thing. |
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After learning the usefulness of calligraphy, he got back to his journey as a entrepreneur. After learning the usefulness of calligraphy, he got back to his journey as an entrepreneur. |
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I'll assume that I could speak with someone that already died. |
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I would talk with Steve Jobs. |
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Jobs was a controversial figure, love him or hate him, but you can't ignore him. |
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I know little about his life. |
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I don't agree with some of his decisions, but it's undeniable that he made history. |
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There's a lot of histories about how he changed the world, my personal favorite is how he changed how we write. |
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In 1975 he took a calligraphy class at Reeds College after dropping out. |
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It wouldn't help him get a degree, but he did any way, because he was intrigued by gorgeous posters in the campus. |
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In his calligraphy class, he learned how different types of letters change how we perceive the message. |
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If a doctor has a visit card with a childish, comical or unprofessional font (e.g. Comic Sans), it's hard to take him seriously. |
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After learning the usefulness of calligraphy, he got back to his journey as a entrepreneur. |
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Years later, when the first Macintosh came out, it came with a wide range of fonts to choose from. |
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The advent of personal printers combined with digital fonts in the Macintosh started a revolution, anyone with a computer and a printer could create their own magazines, books, and posters. |
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The influence of Jobs in typography was subtle, but it revolutionized how we tell our stories. |
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If you are reading this, he changed your life tremendously. |
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Besides typography and digital printing, he also impacted marketing, product design, technology, innovation, and music. |
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That's why, if I could talk to anyone in English, I would like to speak to Steve Jobs. |
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"Stay hungry, stay foolish." |
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- Steve Jobs |
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If you could talk to anyone, who would it be? |
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Thank you for reading. |
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Have a great day. |
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[n] numbers inside brackets are notes on the bottom of the page for later reviews. |
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Please, ignore them. |
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I'll assume that I could speak with someone that has already died. |
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I would talk with Steve Jobs. |
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Love him or hate him, Jobs was a controversial figure, yet you couldn't ignore him [1] . |
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I know little about his life. |
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I don't agree with some of his decisions, but it's undeniable that he made history. |
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There's a lot of histories about how he changed the world, my personal favorite is how he changed how we write. |
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In 1975, he took a calligraphy class at Reeds College after dropping out [2]. |
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It wouldn't help him get a degree, but he did any way, because he was intrigued by gorgeous posters in the campus. |
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In his calligraphy class, he learned how different types of letters change how we perceive the message. |
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If a doctor has a visit card with a childish, comical or unprofessional font (e.g. Comic Sans), it's hard to take them seriously [3]. |
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After learning the usefulness of calligraphy, he got back to his journey as an entrepreneur [4]. |
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Years later, when the first Macintosh came out, it came with a wide range of fonts to choose from. |
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The advent of personal printers combined with digital fonts in the Macintosh started a revolution: anyone with a computer and a printer could create their own magazines, books, and posters [5]. |
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The influence of Jobs in typography was subtle, but it revolutionized how we tell our stories. |
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If you are reading this, he changed your life tremendously. |
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Besides typography and digital printing, he also impacted marketing, product design, technology, innovation, and music. |
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That's why, if I could talk to anyone in English, I would like to speak to Steve Jobs. |
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"Stay hungry, stay foolish." |
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- Steve Jobs |
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If you could talk to anyone, who would it be? |
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Thank you for reading. |
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Have a great day. |
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[1] Stylistics and the sentence is in the past, so can't should also be. |
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[2] Introductory phrase of time requires a comma. |
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[3] Gender neutral is preferable. |
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[4] Indefinite article before word that start with a vowel must be an. |
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[5] Explanations work better with a colon than with a comma. |
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