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If I could influence the minds of people and theand thoughts of people, certainly that would certainly be a different situation.

I would try to influence people to wants to help others and to be kind and compassionate.

I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than they found it, and to be aware of how histheir actions affect to others.

If the entire societyworld could have this way of thinking, the world would be a better place.

People acts so selfish in these times, and I would probably be depressed to knowing about what the or she isy are thinking.

I would try to influence people to wants to help others and to be kind and compassionate.

I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than heow they found it, and to be aware of how his actions affect to others.

If the entire society could havehad this way of thinking, the world would be a better place.

I would try to influence people to wants to help others and to be kind and compassionate.

I think "to wants" seems unnecessary. If you really want to keep this phrase, it should be "to want."

If I had the ability to read the mind of people, I think I probably I wouldn't want to know his or hetheir thoughts.

There's absolutely nothing wrong with saying "His or Hers thoughts" but it's usually more common to use "their" as a neutral pronoun in this case. ;)

People acts so selfishly in these times, and I would probably be depressed to know about what he or she is thinking.

Since you are describing an action (act) you need an adverb instead of an adjective, that's why "selfishly" is a better fit. :) Also, "people" is a plural noun so it's "people act" and not "people acts".

I would try to influence people to wants to help others and to be kind and compassionate.

I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than they found it, and to be aware of how histheir actions affect to others.

Again, there's nothing wrong with using "he/his" but since you are referring to ALL PEOPLE, the pronoun "they" works better.

If I could read the mind of peoplepeople's minds...

the " 's" " shows possession and comes off more natural. also since people are plural you would want the "minds" to be plural as well

If I had the ability to read the mind of peoplepeople's minds, I think probably I wouldn't want to know his or hetheir thoughts.

since you are talking about more than one person (he or she) its more natural to say "their"

People acts so selfish in these times, and I would probably be depressed to know about what the or she isy're/they are thinking.

you don't need to put the word "about". and again since we are not talking about reading everyone's minds. and you would use "they're" or "they are"

If I could influence the minds of people and the and thoughts of people, certainly that would be a different situation.

saying the minds of people and thoughts of people is redundant. if you can bring them both together because it would be understood that people refers to them booth.

I would try to encourage people to leave the world better than they found it, and to be aware of how histheir actions affect to others.

we dont know the gender of the person you are referring to and you are speak in general about people. if the gender is not known we would use the pronoun "they/their"

If the entire society could havethink this way of thinking, the world would be a better place.

you could also say "if all of society could think this way" but what i put sounds more natural