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LLLeslie

Aug. 17, 2025

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If I could have any superpower...

If I could ever have any superpower, I want it to be falling asleep within less than 5 minites as soon as I lie down on bed. You may ask, why is it? It sounds nothing compare to flying in the sky or trun to invisible or Homelander and so on. Well, here is the reason. I believe being able to fly or being transparent those kind of superpower won't genuinely make one happy. Take Homelander, did you see him happy? And most people ignored the powerful ability we originally have ourselves -- the power of sleep. You might have heard that during your sleep, our body is doing so many magics for you. You learn faster when you get enough sleep, your agony gets to flush away after your dreaming. We all benifit from sleeping, yet some are suffering from couldn't get to it. I for one is one of them, and that make me anguish. But I'm working on it now, with some tricks I learn from others, I'm doing better than before. I just hope I can mantain the status quo. Wish we all have a sweet dream.

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If I could have any superpower...

If I could ever have any superpower, I want it to be falling asleep within less than 5 minites as soon as I lie down on bed.

same

You mayight ask, why is it?I want this.

It sounds nothing compare to flying in the sky or trun tourning invisible or becoming Homelander and so on.

Well, here is the reason.

I believe being able to fly or being transparent those kind of superpower won't genuinely make one happy.

TakeLook at Homelander for example, did you ever see him happy?

And most people ignored the powerful ability we originally have ourselves --; the power of sleep.

You might have of heard that during your sleep, our body is doing so many magics for you.sleep the body is doing lots of magic.

You learn faster when you get enough sleep, your agony getsad feelings tgo flush away after youraway once you start dreaming.

We all benifit from sleeping, yet some are suffering from couldn'not get toting it.

I foram one is one of them,of thsoe people and that makes me anguish.depressed

anguish is an uncommon word in spoken english

But I'm working on it now, with some, I'm getting better at falling asleep because of tricks I learnt from others, I'm doing better than befor people.

I just hope I can mantain the status quo.fall asleep faster.

I can maintain the status quo = keep the same situation <-- in this case, falling asleep slower

but you want to fall asleep quicker? why do u wanna suffer with insomnia for 19293021 hours lol

WI wish wethat all of us can have a sweet dream.s.

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7777

Aug. 18, 2025

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whoops sorry my keyboard sucks

thsoe people -> those people***

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LLLeslie

Aug. 18, 2025

1

Thank you for your corrections, only one part I don't get, tho: 'You might have of heard that', what does 'of' here do for?

If I could ever have any superpower, I want it to beould want to be able to falling asleep within less than 5 miniutes, as soon as I lie down oin bed.

Hypothetical situation => "I WOULD want"
"In less than 5 minutes" or "within 5 minutes" are both fine, they mean the same thing
We say that we are "in" bed.

You may ask, why is ithat?

It sounds like nothing compared to being able to flying in the sky or trun tourn invisible orlike Homelander, and so on.

When talking about abilities (especially superpowers), we'd speak about "being able to [XYZ]"

Well, here is the reason.

I believe that being able to fly or being transparencome invisible, that those kinds of superpowers won't genuinely make one happy.

Although transparency is a synonym of invisibility, that word would not be used in the context of superpowers (it's always "invisibility")

Take Homelander for example, did you see him as happy?

And most people ignored the powerful ability we originallalready have ourselves -- the power of sleep.

You might have heard that during your sleep, that your body is doing so many magical things for you.

You learn faster when you get enough sleep, and your agony gets to flushed away after yourduring your night of dreaming.

We all beniefit from sleeping, yet some are suffering from couldn't get tothe inability to get enough of it.

I for one isam one of them, and that makese people, and it causes me anguish.

When describing the feeling a person has because of something or someone else, you have to use "cause" instead of "make."
But if you use the feeling as a description/adjective of the person, you use "make" instead of "cause."

=> He didn't want to cause her pain.
=> She makes him so happy.

But I'm working on it now, with some tricks I learned from others,. I'm doing better than before.

I just hope I can maintain the status quo.

You're not wrong, but I wouldn't use "status quo" here as it's almost always used in the context of society.
An alternative: "I just hope I can continue to sleep well."

WI wish weyou all have a sweet dreams.

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Great job

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LLLeslie

Aug. 18, 2025

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Thanks you so much, nafare! You even explained all the rules for me, that helps me a lot. I'll keep up. 💪

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LLLeslie

Aug. 18, 2025

1

Thank you*

If I could ever have any superpower, I would want it to be falling asleep within less than 5 minites as soon as I lie down on the bed.

You may ask, why is ithat?

It sounds nothing compared to flying in the sky or trun tourning invisible or like Homelander and so on.

I believe being able to fly or being transparent ,those kind of superpowers, won't genuinely make one happy.

Take Homelander for example, did you ever see him happy?

You learn faster when you get enough sleep, y. Your agony gets to flushes away after your dreaming.

We all beniefit from sleeping, yet some are suffering from couldn't get to itnot getting enough sleep.

I for one isam one of them, and that make me anguishit brings me misery.

But I'm working on it now, with some tricks I learned from others, people and I'm doing better than before.

WI wish we all have aeveryone sweet dreams.

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And honestly same. I find it incredibly difficult to go to sleep so I too would love to be able to fall asleep fast.

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LLLeslie

Aug. 18, 2025

1

Thanks a lot, @tandazola03, for the super detailed edits! Really appreciate the effort. 🙏 BTW, you might want to look into CBT-I (Cognitive Behavioral Therapy for Insomnia); I’ve heard it can be quite helpful. Wish you good rest!

If I could have any superpower...


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If I could ever have any superpower, I want it to be falling asleep within less than 5 minites as soon as I lie down on bed.


If I could ever have any superpower, I would want it to be falling asleep within less than 5 minites as soon as I lie down on the bed.

If I could ever have any superpower, I want it to beould want to be able to falling asleep within less than 5 miniutes, as soon as I lie down oin bed.

Hypothetical situation => "I WOULD want" "In less than 5 minutes" or "within 5 minutes" are both fine, they mean the same thing We say that we are "in" bed.

If I could ever have any superpower, I want it to be falling asleep within less than 5 minites as soon as I lie down on bed.

same

You may ask, why is it?


You may ask, why is ithat?

You may ask, why is ithat?

You mayight ask, why is it?I want this.

It sounds nothing compare to flying in the sky or trun to invisible or Homelander and so on.


It sounds nothing compared to flying in the sky or trun tourning invisible or like Homelander and so on.

It sounds like nothing compared to being able to flying in the sky or trun tourn invisible orlike Homelander, and so on.

When talking about abilities (especially superpowers), we'd speak about "being able to [XYZ]"

It sounds nothing compare to flying in the sky or trun tourning invisible or becoming Homelander and so on.

Well, here is the reason.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I believe being able to fly or being transparent those kind of superpower won't genuinely make one happy.


I believe being able to fly or being transparent ,those kind of superpowers, won't genuinely make one happy.

I believe that being able to fly or being transparencome invisible, that those kinds of superpowers won't genuinely make one happy.

Although transparency is a synonym of invisibility, that word would not be used in the context of superpowers (it's always "invisibility")

I believe being able to fly or being transparent those kind of superpower won't genuinely make one happy.

Take Homelander, did you see him happy?


Take Homelander for example, did you ever see him happy?

Take Homelander for example, did you see him as happy?

TakeLook at Homelander for example, did you ever see him happy?

And most people ignored the powerful ability we originally have ourselves -- the power of sleep.


And most people ignored the powerful ability we originallalready have ourselves -- the power of sleep.

And most people ignored the powerful ability we originally have ourselves --; the power of sleep.

You might have heard that during your sleep, our body is doing so many magics for you.


You might have heard that during your sleep, that your body is doing so many magical things for you.

You might have of heard that during your sleep, our body is doing so many magics for you.sleep the body is doing lots of magic.

You learn faster when you get enough sleep, your agony gets to flush away after your dreaming.


You learn faster when you get enough sleep, y. Your agony gets to flushes away after your dreaming.

You learn faster when you get enough sleep, and your agony gets to flushed away after yourduring your night of dreaming.

You learn faster when you get enough sleep, your agony getsad feelings tgo flush away after youraway once you start dreaming.

We all benifit from sleeping, yet some are suffering from couldn't get to it.


We all beniefit from sleeping, yet some are suffering from couldn't get to itnot getting enough sleep.

We all beniefit from sleeping, yet some are suffering from couldn't get tothe inability to get enough of it.

We all benifit from sleeping, yet some are suffering from couldn'not get toting it.

I for one is one of them, and that make me anguish.


I for one isam one of them, and that make me anguishit brings me misery.

I for one isam one of them, and that makese people, and it causes me anguish.

When describing the feeling a person has because of something or someone else, you have to use "cause" instead of "make." But if you use the feeling as a description/adjective of the person, you use "make" instead of "cause." => He didn't want to cause her pain. => She makes him so happy.

I foram one is one of them,of thsoe people and that makes me anguish.depressed

anguish is an uncommon word in spoken english

But I'm working on it now, with some tricks I learn from others, I'm doing better than before.


But I'm working on it now, with some tricks I learned from others, people and I'm doing better than before.

But I'm working on it now, with some tricks I learned from others,. I'm doing better than before.

But I'm working on it now, with some, I'm getting better at falling asleep because of tricks I learnt from others, I'm doing better than befor people.

I just hope I can mantain the status quo.


I just hope I can maintain the status quo.

You're not wrong, but I wouldn't use "status quo" here as it's almost always used in the context of society. An alternative: "I just hope I can continue to sleep well."

I just hope I can mantain the status quo.fall asleep faster.

I can maintain the status quo = keep the same situation <-- in this case, falling asleep slower but you want to fall asleep quicker? why do u wanna suffer with insomnia for 19293021 hours lol

Wish we all have a sweet dream.


WI wish we all have aeveryone sweet dreams.

WI wish weyou all have a sweet dreams.

WI wish wethat all of us can have a sweet dream.s.

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