July 1, 2025
If I could change one thing about myself.
I don't want to change one thing about myself, I want to change many things. But, the most important thing I want to change is to stop thinking what others think about me. Whenever I start to make a change in my life or make a decision, I think my mind also needs to approval from someone else. These thoughts always stops me to take necessary action. I think feeling of being judged is not always good.
If I could change one thing about myself.
I don't want to change one thing about myself, I want to change many things.
But, the most important thing I want to change is to stop thinking about what others think about me.
You have written think a lot, probably better to write something like "to stop caring what others think about me."
Whenever I start to make a change in my life or make a decision, I think that my mind also needs to approval from someone else.
These thoughts always stops me tofrom takeing necessary action.
I think the feeling of being judged is not always good.
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Well done! An insightful piece, you would probably benefit from trying to vary you words a little bit more, maybe try to use "I hope" or "I wish" as well next time.
July 1, 2025
Thanks !!
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If I could change one thing about myself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't want to change one thing about myself, I want to change many things. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But, the most important thing I want to change is to stop thinking what others think about me. But, the most important thing I want to change is to stop thinking about what others think about me. You have written think a lot, probably better to write something like "to stop caring what others think about me." |
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Whenever I start to make a change in my life or make a decision, I think my mind also needs to approval from someone else. Whenever I start to make a change in my life or make a decision, I think that my mind also needs |
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I think feeling of being judged is not always good. I think the feeling of being judged is not always good. |
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These thoughts always stops me to take necessary action. These thoughts always stop |
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