Feb. 20, 2021
If I could be friend of a fictional character ...
It would be Winston Smith from 1984 because he was brave and had a clear idea about what is going on with society, it would be too interesting to talk about big brother and make a strategy to really change the situation, and avoiding O´Brien. I really was disappointed with the ending of the novel because his death wasn´t fair at all. But it´s a dystopic book, what could I wait for?
He tried to make his best even when he didn´t have any chance to change his reality and that´s something that I admire a lot about his character.
Sería amiga de Winston Smith de 1984 porque fue valiente y tenía una idea clara de lo que está sucediendo con la sociedad, sería muy interesante hablar sobre el gran hermano y crear un estrategia para cambiar la situación, además de evadir a O´Brien, quedé muy decepcionada con el final de la novela porque su muerte no fue para nada justa, pero es un libro distopico ¿qué puedo esperar?
Él dio su mejor esfuerzo incluso cuando en realidad no podía cambiar nada y eso es algo que admiro mucho de su personaje.
If I could be the friend of a fictional character ...
or "If I could be friends with a fictional character"
It would be Winston Smith from 1984 because he was brave and had a clear idea about what iwas going on with society, it would be toovery interesting to talk about big brother and make a strategy to really change the situation, and avoiding O´Brien.
Keep an eye on the tense, try not to change unless there is a good reason for it.
Very = muy
too (much) = tan(to) / demasiado
too interesting to talk about = I can't talk about it because it is too much
But it´'s a dystopic book, what could I wait foran novel, what (else) could I expect?
dystopian novel / dystopian story
"dystopian book" might work but it sounds strange because the book itself is the physical thing, the story is dystopian.
Esperar has 2-3 meanings in English, be sure to choose the right one! To hope ("hacer" una esperanza), to wait for (esperar el tren o una persona) y expect (como suponer, pretender etcetera)
He tried to make his best even when he didn´t have any chance to change his reality and that´s something that I admire a lot about his character.
No extra verb is required, "he tried his best" is a very natural phrase.
If you prefer, you can use "to do" there, but "to make" is the incorrect verb. To make is usually for creating a physical item, whereas "to do" has many more applications.
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A very good text! All of it is completely understandable and your points are very well constructed. You write persuasively and the errors marked are quite minor. Keep going!
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If I could be friend of a fictional character ... If I could be the friend of a fictional character ... or "If I could be friends with a fictional character" |
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It would be Winston Smith from 1984 because he was brave and had a clear idea about what is going on with society, it would be too interesting to talk about big brother and make a strategy to really change the situation, and avoiding O´Brien. It would be Winston Smith from 1984 because he was brave and had a clear idea about what Keep an eye on the tense, try not to change unless there is a good reason for it. Very = muy too (much) = tan(to) / demasiado too interesting to talk about = I can't talk about it because it is too much |
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I really was disappointed with the ending of the novel because his death wasn´t fair at all. |
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But it´s a dystopic book, what could I wait for? But it dystopian novel / dystopian story "dystopian book" might work but it sounds strange because the book itself is the physical thing, the story is dystopian. Esperar has 2-3 meanings in English, be sure to choose the right one! To hope ("hacer" una esperanza), to wait for (esperar el tren o una persona) y expect (como suponer, pretender etcetera) |
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He tried to make his best even when he didn´t have any chance to change his reality and that´s something that I admire a lot about his character. He tried No extra verb is required, "he tried his best" is a very natural phrase. If you prefer, you can use "to do" there, but "to make" is the incorrect verb. To make is usually for creating a physical item, whereas "to do" has many more applications. |
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