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giizemliniz

July 5, 2022

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If I...

If I was rich, I would'nt work. Because I will have money. And If I was rich, I would be happy. Money is happiness. Why do I think like that? Because money is everything. For example you have a cancer If you have a money, you can get better by taking the medicine. Let me give another example.. For example you are bored. If you have money you can travell to any country you want.

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If I...

If I was rich, I would'n't work.

Because I willould have money.

And If I was rich, I would be happy.

Money is happiness.

Why do I think like that?

Because money is everything.

For example: you have a cancer. If you have a money, you can get better by taking thebuying medicine.

Let me give another example.. For example Let's say you are bored.

Repeating the word "example" in two consecutive sentences doesn't sound right. You can use "let's say" as a synonym of "for example" here.

If you have money, you can travell to any country you want.

If I...

If I was rich, I would'n't work.

Because I willould have money.

And If I was rich, I would be happy.

Money is happiness.

Why do I think like that?

removing "like" sounds more natural here

Because money is everything.

For example, if you have a cancer. If you have a money, you can get better by taking the medicine.

If you have money you can travell to any country you want.

If I...


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If I was rich, I would'nt work.


If I was rich, I would'n't work.

If I was rich, I would'n't work.

Because I will have money.


Because I willould have money.

Because I willould have money.

And If I was rich, I would be happy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Money is happiness.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Why do I think like that?


Why do I think like that?

removing "like" sounds more natural here

Why do I think like that?

Because money is everything.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For example you have a cancer If you have a money, you can get better by taking the medicine.


For example, if you have a cancer. If you have a money, you can get better by taking the medicine.

For example: you have a cancer. If you have a money, you can get better by taking thebuying medicine.

Let me give another example.. For example you are bored.


Let me give another example.. For example Let's say you are bored.

Repeating the word "example" in two consecutive sentences doesn't sound right. You can use "let's say" as a synonym of "for example" here.

If you have money you can travell to any country you want.


If you have money you can travell to any country you want.

If you have money, you can travell to any country you want.

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