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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 13, 2022

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If Germany Won the World War II

I am studying English right now because the most developed countries in the world are speaking in English. However if Germany won World War II, the language of German would be more popular than English. In Europe, German would be the first official language. In North America, people have to learn German in order to do business with the top new country across the whole of Europe.
New Europe owns more advanced technology than America, and many young people are dreaming of studying and working in New Germany Europe. Thousands of Intelligent and big ambitious people are preparing an IGLTS (as same as IELS) test outside of Europe.
The affection of English would be like French today.
Don't think more, I'm not a NAZI fan, it's only an idea that came to my mind a few minutes ago.

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If Germany Won the World War II

I am studying English right now because the most developed countries in the world are speaking in English.

"are speaking" seems like they can stop speaking English easily but "speak English" is more of a situation

However if Germany won World War II, the language of German would be more popular than English.

You can just say "German".

In Europe, German would be the first official language.

Thousands of Iintelligent and big ambitious people are preparing for an IGLTS (as same as IELS) test outside of Europe.

verb: to prepare FOR something

The affectioninfluence of English would be like French today.

I think I get what you mean, but "influence" is correct for this sentence.

Don't think moreany other things, I'm not a NAZI fansupporter, it's only an idea that came to my mind a few minutes ago.

"supporter" is better in this context

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Nice idea.

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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 13, 2022

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Thanks for your corrections!

If Germany Won the World War II

I am studying English right now because the most developed countries in the world are speaking in English.

However iIf Germany won World War II, the language of Germanhowever, the German language would be more popular than English.

In Europe, German would be the first official language.

In North America, people havewould have had to learn German in order to do business with the top new country across the whole ofin Europe.

Since your talking about an alternative reality, this sentence uses subjunctive tense.

少しドイツ語もできます!

NewThe resulting Europe would owns more advanced technology than America, and many young people arewould dreaming of studying and working in New Germany Europe.

Again, subjunctive tense is necessary.

Thousands of Iintelligent and bhighly ambitious people arewould preparing an IGLTS (as same ase for the IGLTS test (German equivalent of IELS) test outside of Europe.

The affectionllure of English would be like that of French today.

ouch! poor French speakers.

DPlease don't think more, I'm not a NAZI fan, it's onlyI'm a Nazi fan. This is just an idea that came to my mind a few minutes ago.

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Interesting. Good work!

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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 13, 2022

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In North America, people havewould have had to learn German in order to do business with the top new country across the whole ofin Europe.

Three years ago, I decided to learn a second foreign language. Among German, Russian, and Japanese. I chose Japanese finally.

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mari

Dec. 13, 2022

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Three years ago, I decided to learn a second foreign language. Among German, Russian, and Japanese. I chose Japanese finally.

中学生の頃、ドイツ語を勉強し始めました。ドイツ語の生徒は少なかったですから。笑

今、家族のために、4年間半日本語を勉強してきました。

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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 13, 2022

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私は信じている、あなたは幸せな家庭がある

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mari

Dec. 13, 2022

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私は信じている、あなたは幸せな家庭がある

優しいですね!

If Germany Won the World War II

You could also say, "If Germany Won the Second World War".

I am studying English right now because (people in) the most developed countries in the world are speaking in English.

However, if Germany won World War II, the language of German would be more popular than English.

In Europe, German would be the first official language.

In North America, people would have to learn German in order to do business with the top newnew top country across the whole of Europend other European nations.

New Europe ownswould have more advanced technology than America, and many young people arewould dreaming of studying and working in New Germany-led New Europe.

Thousands of Intelligent and big ambitious people arewould preparing an IGLTS (as same ase for the IGLTS (similar to how people currently study for the IELS) test outside of Europe.

The affection ofor English would be like that of French today.

Don't think more, I'm not a NAZI fan, it's onlyget me wrong; I'm not a fan of the Nazis. This is just an idea that came to (my) mind a few minutes ago.

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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 13, 2022

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Thank you! That's great you know so many languages.

If Germany Won the World War II


If Germany Won the World War II

You could also say, "If Germany Won the Second World War".

If Germany Won the World War II

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am studying English now because the most developed countries in the world are speaking in English.


However if Germany won World War II, the language of German would be more popular than English.


However, if Germany won World War II, the language of German would be more popular than English.

However iIf Germany won World War II, the language of Germanhowever, the German language would be more popular than English.

However if Germany won World War II, the language of German would be more popular than English.

You can just say "German".

In Europe, German would be the first official language.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In Europe, German would be the first official language.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In North America, people have to learn German in order to do business with the top new country across the whole of Europe.


In North America, people would have to learn German in order to do business with the top newnew top country across the whole of Europend other European nations.

In North America, people havewould have had to learn German in order to do business with the top new country across the whole ofin Europe.

Since your talking about an alternative reality, this sentence uses subjunctive tense. 少しドイツ語もできます!

New Europe owns more advanced technology than America, and many young people are dreaming of studying and working in New Germany Europe.


New Europe ownswould have more advanced technology than America, and many young people arewould dreaming of studying and working in New Germany-led New Europe.

NewThe resulting Europe would owns more advanced technology than America, and many young people arewould dreaming of studying and working in New Germany Europe.

Again, subjunctive tense is necessary.

Thousands of Intelligent and big ambitious people are prepare an IGLTS (as same as IELS) test outside of Europe.


The affection of English would be like French today.


The affection ofor English would be like that of French today.

The affectionllure of English would be like that of French today.

ouch! poor French speakers.

The affectioninfluence of English would be like French today.

I think I get what you mean, but "influence" is correct for this sentence.

Don't think more, I'm not a NAZI fan, it's only an idea that came to my mind a few minutes ago.


Don't think more, I'm not a NAZI fan, it's onlyget me wrong; I'm not a fan of the Nazis. This is just an idea that came to (my) mind a few minutes ago.

DPlease don't think more, I'm not a NAZI fan, it's onlyI'm a Nazi fan. This is just an idea that came to my mind a few minutes ago.

Don't think moreany other things, I'm not a NAZI fansupporter, it's only an idea that came to my mind a few minutes ago.

"supporter" is better in this context

I am studying English right now because the most developed countries in the world are speaking in English.


I am studying English right now because (people in) the most developed countries in the world are speaking in English.

I am studying English right now because the most developed countries in the world are speaking in English.

I am studying English right now because the most developed countries in the world are speaking in English.

"are speaking" seems like they can stop speaking English easily but "speak English" is more of a situation

Thousands of Intelligent and big ambitious people are preparing an IGLTS (as same as IELS) test outside of Europe.


Thousands of Intelligent and big ambitious people arewould preparing an IGLTS (as same ase for the IGLTS (similar to how people currently study for the IELS) test outside of Europe.

Thousands of Iintelligent and bhighly ambitious people arewould preparing an IGLTS (as same ase for the IGLTS test (German equivalent of IELS) test outside of Europe.

Thousands of Iintelligent and big ambitious people are preparing for an IGLTS (as same as IELS) test outside of Europe.

verb: to prepare FOR something

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