March 5, 2022
IETS Writing Task 1 - Cambridge 12 - Test 5
The bar chart illustrates the informations about the Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 in percentage.
If we look at the chart closely, we can see that women are more active in almost every age groups. The only exception is the group of "15 to 24". 52,8 percent of men and 47,7 percent of women do regular physical activity. The gap between two genders is not dramatically large, it stays usually at 10 percent.
The group of "35 to 44" has the biggest gap. 35 percent of men and 52,2 percent of women exercises regularly, this gap decreases to 10 percent for the group of "45 to 54". The smallest gap belongs to the group of "65 and over", the difference is almost one percent and approximately 47 percent of all of the senior Australians do regular physical activity.
Overall, we can say that Australians have a pretty active life style and they do not give up on it even if they get older. This is a feature that all other cultures should inspire of.
Hello all,
I'm Selin and I'm preparing for IELTS Academic.
I would be really appreciated, if you check my IELTS writing samples.
This one is normally the describing of a chart but unfortunately I can not upload a picture.
If you want to see the chart that I have described, you can google the name of journal.
Thank you in advance :)
IETS Writing Task 1 - Cambridge 12 - Test 5
Theis bar chart illustrates the informations about the on Australian men and women in differentacross age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 inby percentage.
If we look at the chart closely, we can see that women are more active in almost every age groups.
The only exception is the group of "15 to 24".
52,.8 percent of men and 47,.7 percent of women do regular physical activity.
The gap between the two genders is not dramatically large, it stays usually at; it usually stays around 10 percent.
The group of "35 to 44" has the biggest gap.
35 percent of men and 52,.2 percent of women exercises regularly, t. This gap decreases to 10 percent for the group of "45 to 54".
The smallest gap belongs to the group of "65 and over",. In this group the difference is almost one percent, and approximately 47 percent of all of the senior Australians do regular physical activity.
Overall, we can say that Australians have a pretty active life style, and they do not give up on it even ifwhen they get older.
This is a featurecharacteristic that all other cultures should inaspire ofor.
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March 6, 2022
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The bar chart illustrates the informations about the Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 in percentage. Th |
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If we look at the chart closely, we can see that women are more active in almost every age groups. If we look at the chart closely, we can see that women are more active in almost every age group |
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The only exception is the group of "15 to 24". The only exception is the group |
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52,8 percent of men and 47,7 percent of women do regular physical activity. 52 |
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The gap between two genders is not dramatically large, it stays usually at 10 percent. The gap between the two genders is not dramatic |
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The group of "35 to 44" has the biggest gap. The group |
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35 percent of men and 52,2 percent of women exercises regularly, this gap decreases to 10 percent for the group of "45 to 54". 35 percent of men and 52 |
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The smallest gap belongs to the group of "65 and over", the difference is almost one percent and approximately 47 percent of all of the senior Australians do regular physical activity. The smallest gap belongs to the group |
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Overall, we can say that Australians have a pretty active life style and they do not give up on it even if they get older. Overall, we can say that Australians have a pretty active life style, and they do not give up on it even |
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This is a feature that all other cultures should inspire of. This is a |
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