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Today I am going to talk about a sensitive topic and I believe everyone are interested in it.
No matter what kind of work unit do you work in, it is definitely a good thing to get a higher work position, but the attitude toward this thing is very different from each person.
First I will give them who have made a great progress in their position promotion a big congratulation.
this is the result of their hard working and a recognition from their leaders.
But If you didn't get a ideal work position yet, please take it easy, don't be upset about it.
No matter what kind of work do you do, what position are you in, that doesn't matter, just do it well, so we can feel peaceful and solid.
If you are kind of interested in position, just struggle for it, and If you weren't, just be yourself, that is such simple thing.
I am very satisfied with my position, though it is not promoted for over twenty years.
Many of my fomer colleagues work hard, and also have comprehensive ability as well as a high level, but they haven't got a position as high as mine, however, they still work hard, never complain.
As to me, I think my ability just suit for a small team leader, even not suit enough for a class monitor.
Of course, there are also many colleagues they have got a high position than me, that is just because their hard working and their strong ability.
This is my opinion about the topic, and I don't know If I make it clear.

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No matter what kind of work do you do, what position are youyou are in, that doesn't matter, just do it well, so we can feel peaceful and solid.

I am not sure what you meant by "solid".

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No matter what kind of work do you do, what position are youyou are in, thait doesn't matter, just do it well, so we can feel peaceful and solid.

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Today I am going to talk about a sensitive topic and I believe everyone areis interested in it.

I would suggest also the use of the conditional here:
Today I am going to talk about a sensitive topic and I believe everyone would be interested in it.

Or a future tense:

Today I am going to talk about a sensitive topic and I believe everyone will be interested in it.

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As tofor me, I think my ability just suit fors a small team leader, not even not suit enough forto be a class monitor.

I'm not sure what you mean by class monitor. Teacher?

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I'd correct the first part of the sentence as: "No matter what kind of work you do". "do you do" doesn't feel right.

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Today I am going to talk about a sensitive topic and I believe everyone are interested in it.


Today I am going to talk about a sensitive topic andthat I believe everyone areis interested in it. Today I am going to talk about a sensitive topic that I believe everyone is interested in.

This is a more natural way to say this sentence.

Today I am going to talk about a sensitive topic and I believe everyone areis interested in it. Today I am going to talk about a sensitive topic and I believe everyone is interested in it.

I would suggest also the use of the conditional here: Today I am going to talk about a sensitive topic and I believe everyone would be interested in it. Or a future tense: Today I am going to talk about a sensitive topic and I believe everyone will be interested in it.

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No matter what kind of work unit do you work in, it is definitely a good thing to get a higher work position, but the attitude toward this thing is very different from each person.


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Your writing is correct here, it just sounds a bit awkward.

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First I will give them who have made a great progress in their position promotion a big congratulation.


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this is the result of their hard working and a recognition from their leaders.


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But If you didn't get a ideal work position yet, please take it easy, don't be upset about it.


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Please take it easy isn't the phrase you are looking for. It means more to reduce effort, or to relax.

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No matter what kind of work do you do, what position are you in, that is doesn't matter, just do it well, so we can feel peaceful and solid.


If you are kind of interested in position, just struggle for it, and If you weren't, just be yourself, that is such simple thing.


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I am very satisfied with my position, though it is not promoted for over twenty years.


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Many of my fomer colleagues work hard, and also have comprehensive ability as well as a high level, but they haven't got a position as high as mine, however, they still work hard, never complain.


Many of my fomer colleagues work hard, and also have a comprehensive ability as well as a high skill level, but they haven't got a position as high as mine, h. However, they still work hard, and never complain. Many of my fomer colleagues work hard, and have a comprehensive ability as well as a high skill level, but they haven't got a position as high as mine. However, they still work hard and never complain.

Many of my former colleagues work hard, and also have comprehensive ability as well asskills at a high level, but they haven't got a position as high as mine, however, they still work hard, and never complain. Many of my former colleagues work hard, and also have skills at a high level, but they haven't got a position as high as mine, however, they still work hard and never complain.

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As to me, I think my ability just suit for a small team leader, even not suit enough for a class monitor.


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I'm not sure what you mean by class monitor. Teacher?

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Of course, there are also many colleagues they have got a high position than me, that is just because their hard working and their strong ability.


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This is my opinion about the topic, and I don't know If I make it clear.


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No matter what kind of work do you do, what position are you in, that doesn't matter, just do it well, so we can feel peaceful and solid.


No matter what kind of work do you do, what position are you in, that doesn't matter, just do it well, so we can feel peaceful and solid. No matter what kind of work do you do, what position are you in, that doesn't matter, just do it well, so we can feel peaceful.

No matter what kind of work do you do, what position are youyou are in, thait doesn't matter, just do it well, so we can feel peaceful and solid. No matter what kind of work do you do, what position you are in, it doesn't matter, just do it well, so we can feel peaceful and solid.

No matter what kind of work do you do, what position are youyou are in, that doesn't matter, just do it well, so we can feel peaceful and solid. No matter what kind of work you do, what position you are in, that doesn't matter, just do it well, so we can feel peaceful.

I am not sure what you meant by "solid".

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