Like everything, education methods are changing subsequentlye with every generation.

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Homework is one of the new arguments that comes with new generation.

One problem is that "Homework" is not an "argument". You can have arguments *about* something. You can't say some "thing" is an "argument".

Here's an alternative suggestion: "New generations of families and teachers, for example, have new arguments about homework." 👍

(The other problem is that "comes with new generation" isn't right. These are grammatically accurate, "comes with a/the new generation" or "comes with new generations".)

Some believe that students should not be doing homework while others think that it is essential infor their education.

This essay will discuss the necessity of the homework.

"the homework" = A particular piece of homework (i.e. my homework).

Therefore, after school hours should be about socialising and relaxing h. However, it is not always possible due to huge amounts of homework.

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The amount of homework and the stress comes withinthat develops is dangerous to little kids and affects both their educational and social life.

Great 👍. A better phrasing would be "and can affect both their educational and social life".

Moreover due dates and scormarked homeworks put kids in an anxious mindset and may be harmful.

Homework is the plural form. Great 👍

Since children work on their homeworks at home, they get a chance to repeat their daily lessons.

Hence the learned information become more permanent at the memory.

"Hence the information studied will become stored in long-term memory."

Definitely don't say "learned information" but you can say "information learned".

Also in this sentence, "become" must be either "will become" or "becomes".

Teachers can also follow up their students' improvements easily with the submitted homeworks and perhaps repeat areas with misunderstandings.

I believe "improvement" without the plural "s" is correct here. "Improvement" is general and can cover many areas.

Nothing wrong with "misunderstandings" here, but I would suggest replacing it with "mistakes".

Personally I think homework plays an important role but they should be just to practice the daily lessons and actually learn from them raher than. But I believe homework should be exclusively used to support daily lessons and actually help children learn, rather than using homework as a grading method.

I agree!

They should not feel smothered with huge amounts of work and upcoming due dates at an early age, because once they go to university they are going to face these challenges anyway!

Like everything, education methods are changing subsequently with every generation.

With each generation, there are subsequent changes and educational methods are no exception.

Homework is one of the new arguments that comes with new generation.

The importance of homework is one of the discussions to come with the new generation.

Some believe that students should not be doing homework while others think that it is essential into their education.

This essay will discuss the necessity of the homework.

Generally speaking, school children spend at least 6 hours a day at school, where they learn continually learnously.

Although they have time to socialize with their friends at school, it is certainlythis time is limited.

Therefore after school hours should be about socialising and relaxing, however it is not always possible due to hularge amounts of homework prevent this.

The amount of homework and the stress comes within is dangerous to little kids stress placed on children due to the amount of homework they receive is dangerous, and cand affect both their educational and social lifeves.

The sentence structure is a bit plain, and there is a grammatical error in "the stress comes within" - you could say "the stress that comes with the amount of homework"

WThat being said, while homework is indeed stressful to the students, it is also a good way to practice the lessons they learned.

Start with a phrase to clearly organise your thoughts.

Hence the learned information become more permanent at theleaves a deeper impression in ones memory.

The phrasing was a bit awkward and it is "in" the memory, not "at" the memory.

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Personally I think homework plays an important role but they should be just to practice the daily lessons and actually learn from them raher than in...??? .However it's main purpose should be to review the daily lessons and to aid learning, rather than being used as a grading method.

They should not feel smothered withby huge amounts of work and upcoming due dates at an early age because once they go to university they are going to face these challenges anyway!