July 26, 2025
Ielts writing task 1
The line graph shows the number of people who joined five activities in a social centre in Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club had the highest number of participants during the whole period. Table tennis increased a lot, while amateur dramatics became less popular.
In 2000, the film club was the most popular activity with around 65 participants. The number went down a little in 2005 and 2010, but then it went up again and finished at 65 in 2020. Martial arts had around 35 people at the beginning and stayed nearly the same with small changes.
Amateur dramatics started at 30 in 2000 and stayed similar in 2005, but then the number dropped a lot and reached under 10 in 2020. Table tennis had 15 participants in 2000 and increased steadily. In 2020, it had over 50 people.
Musical performances had no participants in 2000 and 2005. It started to rise in 2010, and in 2020, about 20 people joined this activity.
To sum up, film club was always the most popular. Table tennis became more popular over time, but amateur dramatics became less popular.
Amateur dramatics started at 30 in 2000 and stayed similar in 2005, but then the number dropped a lot and reachedfell under 10 in 2020.
Very nitpicky, but reaching has more of a positive/achievement/growth connotation, so "fell" is a little more natural for a decrease)
To sum up, the film club was always the most popular.
The line graph shows the number of people who joined five activities in a social centre in Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club had the highest number of participants during the whole period.
Table tennis increased a lot, while amateur dramatics became less popular.
Although dramatics technically is a word but people would just say "amateur drama" (Although withought context of the graph this may be correct.
The number went downfell a little in 2005 and 2010, but then it went uprose again and finished at 65 in 2020.
What you have written is completely correct but "fell" and "rose" would be more appropriate and concise
Amateur dramatics started at 30 in 2000 and stayed similar in 2005, but then the number dropped a lot and reached underbelow 10 in 2020.
ItThey started to rise in 2010, and in 2020, about 20 people joined this activity.
Musical perforamnces is plural so when refering to it here 'they' should be used instead of 'it'
Table tennis became more popular over time, but amateur dramatics became less popular.
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Good writing - mostly minor changes, even though a lot of the stuff you originally said was technically correct
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Ielts writing task 1 |
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The line graph shows the number of people who joined five activities in a social centre in Melbourne from 2000 to 2020. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Overall, the film club had the highest number of participants during the whole period. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Table tennis increased a lot, while amateur dramatics became less popular. Table tennis increased a lot, while amateur drama Although dramatics technically is a word but people would just say "amateur drama" (Although withought context of the graph this may be correct. |
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In 2000, the film club was the most popular activity with around 65 participants. |
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The number went down a little in 2005 and 2010, but then it went up again and finished at 65 in 2020. The number What you have written is completely correct but "fell" and "rose" would be more appropriate and concise |
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Martial arts had around 35 people at the beginning and stayed nearly the same with small changes. |
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Amateur dramatics started at 30 in 2000 and stayed similar in 2005, but then the number dropped a lot and reached under 10 in 2020. Amateur drama Amateur dramatics started at 30 in 2000 and stayed similar in 2005, but then the number dropped a lot and Very nitpicky, but reaching has more of a positive/achievement/growth connotation, so "fell" is a little more natural for a decrease) |
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Table tennis had 15 participants in 2000 and increased steadily. |
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In 2020, it had over 50 people. |
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Musical performances had no participants in 2000 and 2005. |
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It started to rise in 2010, and in 2020, about 20 people joined this activity.
Musical perforamnces is plural so when refering to it here 'they' should be used instead of 'it' |
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To sum up, film club was always the most popular. To sum up, the film club was always the most popular. |
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Table tennis became more popular over time, but amateur dramatics became less popular. Table tennis became more popular over time, but amateur drama |
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