Feb. 2, 2023
IELTS Writing Practice 6
(The picture of the topic is provided. Please help me refine my essay. Thank you.)
It is clear that there are noticeable changes in the university campus between 2010 and now, only the lake stays the same.
Compare with the campus in 2010, the campus nowadays adds one more student accommodation next to the old one, which is on the left side of the load, across the lake. The shops and restaurant were closed and rebuilt to a dormitory. Before the science building was constructed, the same place stood the university offices. It was separate from teaching block where arts and science courses were conducted there. The old site of teaching block is currently the arts building.
Lawn and seating area in the past were disappeared while the lake is still locating there. The four-floor-high student accommodation was turned into the student facilities which includes shops, offices, etc.
In conclusion, the number of dorms increased by one, the arts and science faculties were separated, and finally, the student facilities combined with shops and offices and so on.
It is clear that there are some noticeable changes in the university campus from between 2010 and now, yet only the lake has staysed the same.
CIn compareison with the campus in 2010, the campus nowadayshas now addsed one more student accommodation building next to the old one, which is on the left side of the load(road?), across the lake.
The shops and restaurant were closed and rebuilt into a dormitory.
Before the science building was constructed, theit's same placelocation stood the university offices.
It was separate from the teaching block where arts and science courses were conducted there.
The old site of the teaching block is now currently the arts building.
LThe lawn and seating area in the past werhas since disappeared while the lake is still locating there.
The four-floor-highstory student accommodation wbuilding has turned into the student facilities which includes shops, and offices, etc among other things.
In conclusion, the number of dorms has increased by one, the arts and science faculties were separated, a. And finally, the student facilities were combined with shops and offices and so on.
Feb. 2, 2023
Thanks a lot. (and yes, I mean 'road' rather than 'load.')
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IELTS Writing Practice 6 |
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(The picture of the topic is provided. Please help me refine my essay. Thank you. ) |
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It is clear that there are noticeable changes in the university campus between 2010 and now, only the lake stays the same. It is clear that there are some noticeable changes in the university campus from between 2010 and now, yet only the lake has stay |
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Compare with the campus in 2010, the campus nowadays adds one more student accommodation next to the old one, which is on the left side of the load, across the lake.
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The shops and restaurant were closed and rebuilt to a dormitory. The shops and restaurant were closed and rebuilt into a dormitory. |
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Before the science building was constructed, the same place stood the university offices. Before the science building was constructed, |
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It was separate from teaching block where arts and science courses were conducted there. It was separate from the teaching block where arts and science courses were conducted there. |
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The old site of teaching block is currently the arts building. The old site of the teaching block is now currently the arts building. |
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Lawn and seating area in the past were disappeared while the lake is still locating there.
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The four-floor-high student accommodation was turned into the student facilities which includes shops, offices, etc. The four- |
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In conclusion, the number of dorms increased by one, the arts and science faculties were separated, and finally, the student facilities combined with shops and offices and so on. In conclusion, the number of dorms has increased by one, the arts and science faculties were separated |
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