March 8, 2022
IELTS Writing - Cambridge 12 - Test 7
The bar chart illustrates the information about the frequency of eating at fast food restaurants in the USA between the years 2003 and 2013.
If you take a quick glance at the chart, you can easily see that the number of Americans who eat out every day and the number of Americans who never eat out are both below 5 percent.
According to the chart, the number of the people who eat out once a week is above 30 percent in 2003 and 2006. In 2013, these numbers decrease to approximately 28 percent.
Another point is the number of the people who eat out once or twice a month. The results are connected with the previous instance, because the number of people who eat out dramatically increase from 25 percent to approximately 33 percent between 2006 and 2013. This means Americans consume less fast food with time.
To sum up, we can clearly see that the healthy life trend in 2010s affects eating choices of Americans. They consume more fast food in 2003 but this number significantly decreases with time.
I'm Selin and I'm preparing for IELTS Academic.
I would be really appreciated, if you check my IELTS writing samples.
This one is normally the describing of a chart but unfortunately I can not upload a picture.
If you want to see the chart that I have described, you can google the name of journal.
Thank you in advance :)
IELTS Writing - Cambridge 12 - Test 7
The bar chart illustrates the information aboutdata on the frequency of eating at fast food restaurants in the USA between the years 2003 and 2013.
If you take a quick glance at the chart, you can easily see that the number of Americans who eat out every day and the number of Americans who never eat out are both below 5 percent.
According to the chart, the number of the people who eat out once a week is above 30 percent in 2003 and 2006.
In 2013, these numbers decrease to approximately 28 percent.
Another pointcategory is the number of the people who eat out once or twice a month.
The results are connected with the previous instancegroup, because the number of people who eat out dramatically increased from 25 percent to approximately 33 percent between 2006 and 2013.
This means Americans consume less fast food with time.
This is a grammatically correct sentence; however, it doesn't having the meaning that you intend (or seem to intend). Instead I would phrase it something like, "This means that Americans have begun consuming less fast food over time".
To sum up, we can clearly see that the healthy life trend in 2010s affects eatinged the consumption choices of Americans.
They consumed more fast food in 2003, but this number significantly decreases with time.
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IELTS Writing - Cambridge 12 - Test 8 |
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The bar chart illustrates the information about the frequency of eating at fast food restaurants in the USA between the years 2003 and 2013. The bar chart illustrates |
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If you take a quick glance at the chart, you can easily see that the number of Americans who eat out every day and the number of Americans who never eat out are both below 5 percent. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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According to the chart, the number of the people who eat out once a week is above 30 percent in 2003 and 2006. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In 2013, these numbers decrease to approximately 28 percent. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Another point is the number of the people who eat out once or twice a month. Another |
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The results are connected with the previous instance, because the number of people who eat out dramatically increase from 25 percent to approximately 33 percent between 2006 and 2013. The results are connected with the previous |
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This means Americans consume less fast food with time. This means Americans consume less fast food with time. This is a grammatically correct sentence; however, it doesn't having the meaning that you intend (or seem to intend). Instead I would phrase it something like, "This means that Americans have begun consuming less fast food over time". |
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To sum up, we can clearly see that the healthy |
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IELTS Writing - Cambridge 12 - Test 7 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To sum up, we can clearly see that the healthy life trend in 2010s affects eating choices of Americans. To sum up, we can clearly see that the healthy life trend in 2010s affect |
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They consume more fast food in 2003 but this number significantly decreases with time. They consumed more fast food in 2003, but this number significantly decreases with time. |
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