Nov. 2, 2023
ielts task 1
The table illustrates the amount of income of secondary and high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
Overall, teachers in Luxembourg had the highest salaries among five nations, while the salaries of teachers in Australia were the lowest-paid. Moreover, the amount of time for teachers in Denmark to the maximum salary was much faster than in others.
The amount of starting income of teachers in Luxembourg started at 80,000 US$, whereas this figure for Denmark was significantly lower, at 47,000 US$. By comparison, the figures for other countries just stood under 34,600 US$.
The teachers with at least 15 years of experience in Luxembourg earned up to 112,00 US$ per year, followed by Denmark (54,000 US$) and Korea (52,600 US$). Meanwhile, the figures for Australia and Japan were significantly lower, around 49,000 US$. It took only Australia and Denmark less than 10 years to reach the maximum incomes, with respective figures being 9 years and 8 years, while secondary and high school teachers in other nations had to wait at least 30 years.
The table illustrates the amount of income of secondary and high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
Overall, teachers in Luxembourg had the highest salaries among five nations, while the salaries of teachers in Australia were the lowest-paid.
Moreover, the amount of time for teachers in Denmark to the maximum salary was much faster than in others.
The amount of starting income of teachers in Luxembourg started at 80,000 US$, whereas this figure for Denmark was significantly lower, at 47,000 US$.
By comparison, the figures for other countries just stood under 34,600 US$.
The teachers with at least 15 years of experience in Luxembourg earned up to 112,00 US$ per year, followed by Denmark (54,000 US$) and Korea (52,600 US$).
Meanwhile, the figures for Australia and Japan were significantly lower, around 49,000 US$.
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Amazing job! My only real correction is that the dollar sign comes before the number, and you should use USD to signify US dollars. For example: 34,600 US$ should be $34,600 USD. 112,00 US$ (you probably meant 112,000 instead of 112,00 by the way) should be $112,00 USD.
Nov. 7, 2023
Thank you so muc.h.
ielts task 1
The table illustrates the amount of income of secondary and high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
Overall, teachers in Luxembourg had the highest salaries among five nations, while the salaries of teachers in Australia were the lowest-paid.
Or 'teachers in Australia were the lowest-paid'
Moreover, the amount of time for teachers in Denmark to (reach?) the maximum salary was much faster than in others.
The sentence doesn't make sense as drafted
By comparison, the figures for other countries just stood just under 34,600 US$.
Do you mean the average? If so, good to specify
The teachers with at least 15 years of experience in Luxembourg earned up to 112,00 US$ per year, followed by Denmark (54,000 US$) and Korea (52,600 US$).
It took onlyOnly in Australia and Denmark does it take less than 10 years to reach the maximum incomes, with respective figures being 9 years and 8 years, while secondary and high school teachers in other nations had to wait at least 30 years.
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Good piece, mistakes are only in quite subtle elements of grammar!
Nov. 7, 2023
Thank you so much.
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The table illustrates the amount of income of secondary and high school teachers in five countries in 2009. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Overall, teachers in Luxembourg had the highest salaries among five nations, while the salaries of teachers in Australia were the lowest-paid. Overall, teachers in Luxembourg had the highest salaries among five nations, while the salaries of teachers in Australia were the lowest Or 'teachers in Australia were the lowest-paid' This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover, the amount of time for teachers in Denmark to the maximum salary was much faster than in others. Moreover, the amount of time for teachers in Denmark to (reach?) the maximum salary was much faster than in others. The sentence doesn't make sense as drafted Moreover, the amount of time for teachers in Denmark to the maximum salary was much faster than in others |
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The amount of starting income of teachers in Luxembourg started at 80,000 US$, whereas this figure for Denmark was significantly lower, at 47,000 US$. The amount of starting income of teachers in Luxembourg started at 80,000 US$, whereas this figure for Denmark was significantly lower, at 47,000 US$ |
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By comparison, the figures for other countries just stood under 34,600 US$. By comparison, the figures for other countries Do you mean the average? If so, good to specify By comparison, the figures for other countries just stood under 34,600 US$ |
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The teachers with at least 15 years of experience in Luxembourg earned up to 112,00 US$ per year, followed by Denmark (54,000 US$) and Korea (52,600 US$). T The teachers with at least 15 years of experience in Luxembourg earned up to 112,00 US$ per year, followed by Denmark (54,000 US$) and Korea (52,600 US$) |
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Meanwhile, the figures for Australia and Japan were significantly lower, around 49,000 US$. Meanwhile, the figures for Australia and Japan were significantly lower, around 49,000 US$ |
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It took only Australia and Denmark less than 10 years to reach the maximum incomes, with respective figures being 9 years and 8 years, while secondary and high school teachers in other nations had to wait at least 30 years.
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