Oct. 27, 2023
ielts task 1
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian women of six different age groups, 19 and under, 20-24, 25-30, 30-34, 34-39, and 40 and over, who bore their first child in 1966, 1986, and 2006.
The bar chart compares the proportion of first-time mothers of six different age groups, , in 1966, 1986, and 2006.
Overall, the age at which women gave birth to their first child increased over time. There was an overall downward trend in the percentage of first-time mothers aged 24 and under, while those aged 30 and over saw the opposite trend.
In 1966, the proportion of first-time mothers at the age of 20 to 24 (60%) far exceeded those for the other age groups.
In 1966, women in their early twenties accounted for the highest percentage (60%), but that figure decreased to.
In 1966, six in ten women were between 20 and 24 years old when delivering their first child, compared to just over 3 in 10 for the younger group. After four decades, these figures dropped sharply to around 34% and 15%, respectively. In contrast, the 30-34 and 34-39 age groups had the opposite trend, rising from approximately 13% to 47% and from 8% to 30%, respectively.
Additionally, the 25-30 age group accounted for 38% of all first-time mothers in 1966, but that increased to 55% in 1986, the highest proportion in that year. It then fell to 45% in 2006.
Additionally, the 25-30 age group had the most erratic changes, with a significant rise from 38% in 1966 to 55% in 1986, the highest proportion in that year, followed by a drop to 39% in 2006.
Finally, the 40-or-above age group remained basically flat between 1966, 1986 and 2006, ranging between 2% and 4%.
ielts tIELTS Task 1
Titles are usually capitalized like this.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian women of six different age groups, 19 and under, 20-24, 25-30, 30-34, 34-39, and 40 and over, who bore their first child in 1966, 1986, and 2006.
This is technically ok, but I would probably break it up into two sentences for clarity.
The bar chart compares the proportion of first-time mothers of six different age groups, , in 1966, 1986, and 2006.
Overall, the age at which women gave birth to their first child increased over time.
There was an overall downward trend in the percentage of first-time mothers aged 24 and under, while those aged 30 and over saw the opposite trend.
In 1966, the proportion of first-time mothers at the age of 20 to 24 (60%) far exceeded those ofor the other age groups.
In 1966, women in their early twenties accounted for the highest percentage (60%), but that figure decreased too.
In 1966, six in ten6 out of 10 women were between 20 and 24 years old when delivering their first child, compared to just over 3 inout of 10 for the younger group.
I would say to keep the numbers consistent. Either use written numbers or digits, but don't mix.
After four decades, these figures dropped sharply to around 34% and 15%, respectively.
In contrast, the 30-34 and 34-39 age groups had the opposite trend, rising from approximately 13% to 47% and from 8% to 30%, respectively.
Additionally, the 25-30 age group accounted for 38% of all first-time mothers in 1966, but that increased to 55% in 1986, the highest proportion in that year.
It then fell to 45% in 2006.
Additionally, the 25-30 age group had the most erratic changes, with a significant rise from 38% in 1966 to 55% in 1986, the highest proportion in that year, followed by a drop to 39% in 2006.
Finally, the 40-or-above age group remained basically flat between 1966, 1986 and 2006, ranging between 2% and 4%.
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ielts task 1
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian women of six different age groups, 19 and under, 20-24, 25-30, 30-34, 34-39, and 40 and over, who bore their first child in 1966, 1986, and 2006. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian women of six different age groups, 19 and under, 20-24, 25-30, 30-34, 34-39, and 40 and over, who bore their first child in 1966, 1986, and 2006. This is technically ok, but I would probably break it up into two sentences for clarity. |
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The bar chart compares the proportion of first-time mothers of six different age groups, , in 1966, 1986, and 2006. The bar chart compares the proportion of first-time mothers of six different age groups, |
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Overall, the age at which women gave birth to their first child increased over time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There was an overall downward trend in the percentage of first-time mothers aged 24 and under, while those aged 30 and over saw the opposite trend. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In 1966, the proportion of first-time mothers at the age of 20 to 24 (60%) far exceeded those for the other age groups. In 1966, the proportion of first-time mothers at the age of 20 to 24 (60%) far exceeded those of |
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In 1966, women in their early twenties accounted for the highest percentage (60%), but that figure decreased to. In 1966, women in their early twenties accounted for the highest percentage (60%), but that figure decreased too. |
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In 1966, six in ten women were between 20 and 24 years old when delivering their first child, compared to just over 3 in 10 for the younger group. In 1966, I would say to keep the numbers consistent. Either use written numbers or digits, but don't mix. |
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After four decades, these figures dropped sharply to around 34% and 15%, respectively. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In contrast, the 30-34 and 34-39 age groups had the opposite trend, rising from approximately 13% to 47% and from 8% to 30%, respectively. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Additionally, the 25-30 age group accounted for 38% of all first-time mothers in 1966, but that increased to 55% in 1986, the highest proportion in that year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It then fell to 45% in 2006. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Additionally, the 25-30 age group had the most erratic changes, with a significant rise from 38% in 1966 to 55% in 1986, the highest proportion in that year, followed by a drop to 39% in 2006. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Finally, the 40-or-above age group remained basically flat between 1966, 1986 and 2006, ranging between 2% and 4%. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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