March 10, 2022
IELTS T2 practice (3)
Topic:
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
My answer:
It is true that the method of interation among people was changed by technology. Comparing with the past, there are various ways human communitcates influenced by technology. I think that it is a positive development.
Here are the different aspects people changed during their relationship with others. Firstly, more people prefer to text online rather than hang out together, especially in the young people. For example, it is very sever in Japan that many male adults would stay at home for years, and they would never throw the garbage out which leads to they live with them for hundreds or even thousands days. Secondly, people are more afraid of social life than ever before which impact their daily life such as children, who would have a lonely childhood.
I think there are many disadvantages of the case. On one hand, most people can not live without communication in the complex society, especially in the cities. Although the technology is well developed, it can help with most of our need, especially the emotion need. Stay at home can not meet the need. On the other hand, the earth is so beautiful, it worth us to explore. Furthermore, there are still many people need our help personnally, the disabled inparticular. We should go out more to help the others to make the world more harmony.
In conclusion, many types of actions between human have been changed a lot by the development of technology, I would argue that it is bad for the society.
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make?
Has this been a positive or negative development?
My answer:
It is true that the method of interaction among people whas been changed by technology.
Comparing withed to the past, there are various ways in which human communitcatesions has been influenced by technology.
I think that it is a positive development.
Here are the different aspects people changed duringwith their relationship with others.
Firstly, more people prefer to text online rather than hang out together, especially in the young people.
For example, it is very sever ia severe example, In Japan that, many male adults would stay at home for years, and they would never throw the garbage out which. This leads to theym liveing with ithem for hundreds or even thousands of days.
Secondly, people are more afraid of a social life than ever before which impacts their daily life such as children, who would have a lonely childhood.
I think there are many disadvantages of the caseis situation.
On one hand, mMost people can not live without communication in the complex society, especially in the cities.
Although the technology is well developed, it can't help with most of our needs, especially the emotional needs.
I think you mean to say that technology "can't" help us. Since the sentence - "Although the technology is well developed, it can help with most of our needs, especially the emotional needs." doesn't make sense, since the word "although" implies a contradiction, and the following sentence supports the idea.
On the other hand, tThe earth is so beautiful, it is worth for us to explore it.
Furthermore, there are still many people who need our help personnally, the disabled in particular.
We should go out more to help the others toand make the world more harmonybetter.
the word "harmony" doesn't suit in this context
In conclusion, many types of actions between humans have been changed a lotdrastically by the development of technology,. I would argue that it is bad for the society.
March 11, 2022
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IELTS T2 practice (3) |
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I think that it is a positive development. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? |
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Has this been a positive or negative development? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My answer: This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is true that the method of interation among people was changed by technology. It is true that the method of interaction among people |
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Comparing with the past, there are various ways human communitcates influenced by technology. Compar |
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Here are the different aspects people changed during their relationship with others. Here are the different aspects people changed |
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Firstly, more people prefer to text online rather than hang out together, especially in the young people. Firstly, more people prefer to text online rather than hang out together, especially |
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For example, it is very sever in Japan that many male adults would stay at home for years, and they would never throw the garbage out which leads to they live with them for hundreds or even thousands days. For |
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Secondly, people are more afraid of social life than ever before which impact their daily life such as children, who would have a lonely childhood. Secondly, people are more afraid of a social life than ever before which impacts their daily life such as children, who would have a lonely childhood. |
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I think there are many disadvantages of the case. I think there are many disadvantages of th |
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On one hand, most people can not live without communication in the complex society, especially in the cities.
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Although the technology is well developed, it can help with most of our need, especially the emotion need. Although the technology is well developed, it can't help with most of our needs, especially the emotional needs. I think you mean to say that technology "can't" help us. Since the sentence - "Although the technology is well developed, it can help with most of our needs, especially the emotional needs." doesn't make sense, since the word "although" implies a contradiction, and the following sentence supports the idea. |
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Stay at home can not meet the need. |
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On the other hand, the earth is so beautiful, it worth us to explore.
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Furthermore, there are still many people need our help personnally, the disabled inparticular. Furthermore, there are still many people who need our help person |
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We should go out more to help the others to make the world more harmony. We should go out more to help the word "harmony" doesn't suit in this context |
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In conclusion, many types of actions between human have been changed a lot by the development of technology, I would argue that it is bad for the society. In conclusion, many |
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