March 9, 2022
IELTS T2 practice (2)
topic:
Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
my work:
Overseas movies are more popular than the native. I think the reason is that the themes of local films are so limited that people cannot produce excellent movies.The authorities should invest more in both local film industries and publishing industries.
The limitation in themes and technology can really impact the development of local films. On one hand, a good scripts is the fundamental issue of a good movie, so the simplex publishing types of books can hardly produce a good movie. For example, there are many famous serious movies in America such as Harry Porter which are based on a science fition, both of the books and movies are well-known. On the other hand, the poor special technology also restrain a film become popular. Because young people favor the science movies much.
In my opinion, the government invest more fund to the local film industries would help a lot. Firstly, it could encourage more people to write different sorts of books if they have enough income to have a better life. Secondly, the IT workers would also have more opportunities to improve themselves with abundant money, because the special technique costs a lot of money. Finally, the financial support can help with reducing the ticket fee so that it would attract more people to go to the cenimas, especially during the holidays such as Spring Festival and National Day.
In conclusion, as the limitation of the local movies, many foreign movies are preferred. Governments should support much more in both publising and film industries.
IELTS T2 practice (2)
topic:
Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films.
Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
my work:
OverseasForeign movies are more popular than the nativelocal ones.
Sounds more natural.
I think the reason is that the themes of local films are so limited that people cannot produce excellentvery good movies. The authorities should invest more in both local film industries and publishing industries.
"Excellent" is okay, but "very good" used with "cannot" sounds more like it's actually not good.
The limitation in themes and technology can really impact the development of local films.
On one hand, a good scripts is the fundamessential issue offor a good movie, so the simplex publishing types of books can hardly produce a good movie.
"Issue" sounds negative. "Fundamental" is okay, but "essential" sounds more natural.
For example, there are many famous serious movies in America, such as Harry Porter, which are based on a science fiction, both of. Both the books and movies are well-known.
"Both of" sounds like there are only two books, which is not the case.
On the other hand, the poor special technology also restrainhinders a film from becomeing popular.
"Restrain" doesn't work in this context.
Because young people favor the science movies much.
Do you mean science fiction? (Sci-fi)
In my opinion, the government investing more fund s into the local film industries would help a lot.
Firstly, it could encourage more people to write different sorts of books, if they have enough income to have a better life.
Secondly, the IT workers would also have more opportunities to improve themselves with abundant money, because the special technique costs a lot of money.
Finally, the financial support can help with reducing the ticket fee so that it would attract, which would invite more people to go to the ceniinemas, especially during the holidays such as Spring Festival and National Day.
I think "invite" sounds more natural here.
In conclusion, asbecause of the limitation of the local movies, many foreign movies are preferred.
Governments should support much more in both publishing and film industries much more.
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topic: This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why could this be?Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? |
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my work: This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Overseas movies are more popular than the native.
Sounds more natural. |
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I think the reason is that the themes of local films are so limited that people cannot produce excellent movies.The authorities should invest more in both local film industries and publishing industries. I think the reason is that the themes of local films are so limited that people cannot produce "Excellent" is okay, but "very good" used with "cannot" sounds more like it's actually not good. |
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The limitation in themes and technology can really impact the development of local films. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On one hand, a good scripts is the fundamental issue of a good movie, so the simplex publishing types of books can hardly produce a good movie. On one hand, a good script "Issue" sounds negative. "Fundamental" is okay, but "essential" sounds more natural. |
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For example, there are many famous serious movies in America such as Harry Porter which are based on a science fition, both of the books and movies are well-known. For example, there are many famous serious movies in America, such as Harry Porter, which are based on "Both of" sounds like there are only two books, which is not the case. |
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On the other hand, the poor special technology also restrain a film become popular. On the other hand, the poor special "Restrain" doesn't work in this context. |
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Because young people favor the science movies much. Because young people favor the science movies much. Do you mean science fiction? (Sci-fi) |
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In my opinion, the government invest more fund to the local film industries would help a lot. In my opinion, the government investing more fund |
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Firstly, it could encourage more people to write different sorts of books if they have enough income to have a better life. Firstly, it could encourage more people to write different sorts of books, if they have enough income to have a better life. |
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Secondly, the IT workers would also have more opportunities to improve themselves with abundant money, because the special technique costs a lot of money. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Finally, the financial support can help with reducing the ticket fee so that it would attract more people to go to the cenimas, especially during the holidays such as Spring Festival and National Day. Finally, the financial support can help with reducing the ticket fee I think "invite" sounds more natural here. |
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In conclusion, as the limitation of the local movies, many foreign movies are preferred. In conclusion, |
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Governments should support much more in both publising and film industries. Governments should support |
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