IELTS C1, Part 1: Globalization

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IELTS C1, Part 1: Globalization

Barely any other topic receives as much attention as globalization does. While some assert that it detrimentally influences minority cultures and languages, I firmly contend that globalization not only fosters economic growth worldwide, but also creates an array of opportunities previously unknown to humankind. This essay will discuss both perspectives before reaching a reasoned conclusion.
Firstly, one should understand the economic impact of globalization. When trading with each other, countries can mutually benefit by specializing in production of certain goods. Moreover, new investment opportunities allow less developed countries to substantially boost their economy in mere years. For example, significant GDP growth has ensued for countries like China and India soon after they have opened themselves to international investments.
Secondly, one of the biggest advantages of globalizatoin is the access to information. Unlike earlier, neither noble background nor having a huge sum of money to study at the university is a prerequisite for being educated in the era of an information society.

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IELTS C1, Part 1: Globalization

Barely any other topic receives as much attention as globalization does.

While some assert that it detrimentally influences minority cultures and languages, I firmly contend that globalization not only fosters economic growth worldwide, but also creates an array of opportunities previously unknown to humankind.

This essay will discuss both perspectives before reaching a reasoned conclusion.

Firstly, one should understand the economic impact of globalization.

When trading with each other, countries can mutually benefit by specializing in production of certain goods.

Moreover, new investment opportunities allow less developed countries to substantially boost their economy in mere years.

For example, significant GDP growth has ensued for countries like China and India soon after they have opened themselves to international investments.

Secondly, one of the biggest advantages of globalizatoin is the access to information.

Unlike earlier, neither noble background nor having a huge sum of money to study at the university is a prerequisite for being educated in the era of an information society.

IELTS C1, Part 1: Globalization