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One thing that intrigues me is the cultural differences between some places across the globe, even the simplest things like taking a shower.
Be it how many showers you take by day or if the shower itself is powered by electricity or gas.
Seeing the internet feed on social media, specially from the United States, people say that electric shower is kind of a `death trap`, because of the fear of mixing electricity and water and dying from electrocution.
Living in a country where electric shower is the de facto standard in most of the bathrooms, it ends up sounding silly or funny for me, since I have never seen any news about someone dying electrocuted during bath, but I have heard about problems related to gas leaking causing death either by explosion or intoxication.
So I would say that most people are afraid of what they don't exactly are well acquainted with, for instance, people that uses electric shower fear gas shower and the other way around is also true. Funny isn't ? It probably has a field in psychology that explains this phenomena.
One Something that intrigues me isare the cultural differences between some places across the globe, even with the simplest things like taking a shower.
Something that intrigues me are the cultural differences between some places across the globe, even with the simplest things like taking a shower.
"Cultural differences" is plural, therefore so "are" should be used.
Be it how many showers you take byin a day or ifwhether the shower itself is powered by electricity or gas.
Be it how many showers you take in a day or whether the shower itself is powered by electricity or gas.
"in a day" sounds more natural.
I don't think "if" is wrong, but "whether" sounds better here.
Seeing the internet feed on social media, especially from the United States, people say that an electric shower is a kind of a `death trap`, because of the fear of mixing electricity and water and dying from electrocution.
Seeing the internet feed on social media, especially from the United States, people say that an electric shower is a kind of `death trap`, because of the fear of mixing electricity and water and dying from electrocution.
Living in a country where electric shower is the de facto standard in most of the bathrooms, it ends up sounding silly or funny for me, since I have never seen any news about someone dygetting electrocuted during a bath, but I have heard about problems related to gas leaking causing death either by explosion or intoxication.
Living in a country where electric shower is the de facto standard in most of the bathrooms, it ends up sounding silly or funny for me, since I have never seen any news about someone getting electrocuted during a bath, but I have heard about problems related to gas leaking causing death either by explosion or intoxication.
This sentence is a bit long but I can't think of how to break it up nicely.
"getting electrocuted" sounds more natural, if you want to use "dying" then I would say "dying by electrocution"
So I would say that most people are afraid of what they doaren't exactly are well acquainted with, f. For instance, people that uses an electric shower fear gas showers and the other way around is also truevice versa.
So I would say that most people are afraid of what they aren't well acquainted with. For instance, people that use an electric shower fear gas showers and vice versa.
It's better to split this into 2 sentences.
"... and the other way around is also true" is grammatically correct but it's a bit long, "vice versa" is more commonly used and means the same thing.
Funny isn't it? Funny isn't it?
ItThere is probably has a field in psychology that explains this phenomena.
There is probably a field in psychology that explains this phenomena.
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Good job! I didn't even know there are different types of showers. This was interesting, thank you for sharing.
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One thing that intrigues me is the cultural differences between some places across the globe, even the simplest things like taking a shower.
"Cultural differences" is plural, therefore so "are" should be used. |
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Be it either how many showers you take by day or the shower itself powered by electricity or gas. |
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Seeing the internet feed on social media, specially from the United States, people say that electric shower is kind of a `death trap`, because of the fear of mixing electricity and water and dying from electrocution.
Seeing the internet feed on social media, especially from the United States, people say that an electric shower is a kind of |
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Living in a country where electric shower is the de facto standard in most of the bathrooms, it ends up sounding silly or funny for me, since I have never seen any news about someone dying electrocuted during bath, but I have heard about problems related to gas leaking causing death either by explosion or intoxication.
Living in a country where electric shower is the de facto standard in most of the bathrooms, it ends up sounding silly or funny for me, since I have never seen any news about someone This sentence is a bit long but I can't think of how to break it up nicely. "getting electrocuted" sounds more natural, if you want to use "dying" then I would say "dying by electrocution" |
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So I would say that most people are afraid of what they don't exactly are well acquainted with, for instance, people that uses electric shower fear gas shower and the other way around is also true.
So I would say that most people are afraid of what they It's better to split this into 2 sentences. "... and the other way around is also true" is grammatically correct but it's a bit long, "vice versa" is more commonly used and means the same thing. |
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Funny isn't ? Funny isn't it? Funny isn't it? |
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It probably has a field in psychology that explains this phenomena.
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Be it how many showers you take by day or if the shower itself is powered by electricity or gas.
Be it how many showers you take "in a day" sounds more natural. I don't think "if" is wrong, but "whether" sounds better here. |
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