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May 13, 2020

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THINGS I WANT TO KEEP DOING

I have DJ'd since last summer. Until I started to DJ, I love to listen to music, however I could not have courage to DJ. One day, I watched ULTRA MIAMI which is one of the biggest festival of EDM music, I was shocked. Because only one person make a lot of people excite, and I thought I want to make a lot of people excite too. I keep DJing until my dream is come true.

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May 13, 2020

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I have DJ'd since last summer.


I have DJ'd been DJ'ing since last summer. I have been DJ'ing since last summer.

THINGS I WANT TO KEEP DOING


Until I started to DJ, I love to listen to music, however I could not have courage to DJ.


Until I started to DJ, I loved to listen to music, however I couldid not have the courage to DJ. Until I started to DJ, I loved to listen to music, however I did not have the courage to DJ.

One day, I watched ULTRA MIAMI which is one of the biggest festival of EDM music, I was shocked.


Because only one person make a lot of people excite, and I thought I want to make a lot of people excite too.


Because only one person makes a lot of people get excited, and I thought I want to make a lot of people excite too. Because only one person makes a lot of people get excited, and I thought I want to make a lot of people excite too.

I keep DJing until my dream is come true.


I will keep DJing until my dream is come true. I will keep DJing until my dream is come true.

Please correct this sentence, and I want to know other sentences, keeping this content.


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