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dunia

Nov. 6, 2019

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The news say raining season ends and dry season begins but today is raining a lot.
I don't want to go out I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate.


Las noticias dicen que la temporada de lluvias termina y comienza la estación seca, pero hoy está lloviendo mucho.
No quiero salir me gustaría quedarme en casa y tomar chocolate caliente.

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saimdusan

Dec. 9, 2019

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tToday Today

You should capitalize a title

The news say raining season ends and dry season begins but today is raining a lot.


The news says the rainingy season ends and the dry season begins, but today it is raining a lot. The news says the rainy season ends and the dry season begins, but today it is raining a lot.

The news says the rainingy season has endsed and the dry season beginshas begun, but today ist will still raining a lot. The news says the rainy season has ended and the dry season has begun, but today it will still rain a lot.

If you're writing this at the end of the day, maybe "but today it still rained a lot" is better.

I don't want to go out I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate.


I don't want to go out, I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate. I don't want to go out, I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate.

I don't want to go out. I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate instead. I don't want to go out. I'd like to stay at home and drink hot chocolate instead.

"instead" is optional. It makes the second sentence connect to the previous one better.

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