June 29, 2021
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Speaking of retirement, I think the best retirement age should be at fifty. This represents the high civilization and development of society. You know, people's bodies will decline since they are fifty, so the policy could allow people to do what they want when they still have good health, and I think this can be seen as a perfect life. After all, people only live once. But from what we see in the real world, this thought can only be a best wish.
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Speaking of retirement, I think the best retirement age should be at fifty.
This represents the high civilization and development of society.
This represents high civilization and development of society.
You know, people's bodies will decline since they are fifty, so the policy could allow people to do what they want when they still have good health, and I think this can be seen as a perfect life.
After all, people only live once.
But from what we see in the real world, this thought can only be a best wish.
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I fully agree! It seems like the world has the resources for this already... it is just that the resources are hoarded by the very few ultra wealthy. We can dream!
June 30, 2021
Thank you for the corrections and the brilliant comments.
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Speaking of retirement, I think the best retirement age should be at fifty. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This represents the high civilization and development of society.
This represents |
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You know, people's bodies will decline since they are fifty, so the policy could allow people to do what they want when they still have good health, and I think this can be seen as a perfect life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After all, people only live once. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But from what we see in the real world, this thought can only be a best wish. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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