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A letter forto my dad A letter to my dad

"for" is technically correct, but in this situation "to" is used.

My dear dDad, I’m writing forto you again! My dear Dad, I’m writing to you again!

We are really glad to have received your letter today. We are really glad to have received your letter today.

All the words are integrated thshowed your true love and true feelings. All the words showed your true love and feelings.

I'm not entirely sure what you are trying to say here.

Although I stayam far away from you , I still can get the feeling of your sincerely solicitude. Although I am far away from you, I still can get the feeling of your sincere solicitude.

Punctuation marks come directly after the word with no space.

Although I stayam far away from you , I still can get the feeling of, I can still can feel your sincerely solicitud care. Although I am far away, I can still can feel your sincere care.

“Solicitude” isn't a word that is used very much. I actually had to look it up. I think "care" might be a better translation of "关怀”

It makes me miss you so much. It makes me miss you so much.

Today is 5th,December, 5th. I’ll have a 49- days winter holiday and the airplane ticket to home haveis booked already. Today is December 5th. I’ll have a 49 day winter holiday and the airplane ticket to home is booked already.

Today is 5th,December, 5th. I’ll have a 49-days long winter holiday, and theI have already booked my airplane ticket to home have booked already. Today is December 5th. I’ll have a 49-day long winter holiday, and I have already booked my airplane ticket home.

I’ll go with a girl who is in the same city ands her roommate. I’ll go with a girl who is in the same city as her roommate.

I’ll go with a girl who ins from the same city and her roommate. I’ll go with a girl who is from the same city and her roommate.

We planned to take the plane together onat 8 o’clock in the morning. We planned to take the plane together at 8 o’clock in the morning.

It is not muchvery expensive that we take the plane because we booked it in advance. It is not very expensive that we take the plane because we booked it in advance.

It is not muchtoo expensive that we take the planefor us to fly because we booked itickets in advance. It is not too expensive for us to fly because we booked tickets in advance.

Everyone is kindly for me ,so d to me, so I treasure them sincerely. Everyone is kind to me, so I treasure them sincerely.

EBecause everyone is so kindly for me ,so do I to me, I will treasure them sincerely. Because everyone is so kind to me, I will treasure them sincerely.

I and mMy roommates and I are close friends now. My roomates and I are close friends now.

I remembered the last meeting of new people, s. Someone introduced himself byin Russian, someone sang by in Korean, and most of us introduced ourselves byin English; a. After that , we had aplayed funny sports. I remembered the last meeting of new people. Someone introduced himself in Russian, someone sang by in Korean, and most of us introduced ourselves in English. After that, we played fun sports.

I remembered the last meeting ofwhere there were some new people, s. Someone introduced himself byin Russian, someone sang byin Korean, and most of us introduced ourselves byin English; a. After that , we had aplayed some funny sports. I remember the last meeting where there were some new people. Someone introduced himself in Russian, someone sang in Korean, and most of us introduced ourselves in English. After that, we played some fun sports.

Dad, as to getAs for getting a driver’'s license ,I haven’t, I've considered about it, maybe get it next timeit but maybe next time I'll get it. As for getting a driver's license, I've considered it but maybe next time I'll get it.

You would say you have considered it because you then say that you may get it next time, which is a consideration.

Dad, as tofor getting a driver’s license , I haven’t considered about it, maybeuch. Maybe I will get it next time. Dad, as for getting a driver’s license, I haven’t considered it much. Maybe I will get it next time.

Dear dad, I haven’t written to you for a long time, and there are too many things happeneding these day tohat I don’t know what I to talk, about. haha. Dear dad, I haven’t written to you for a long time, and there are too many things happening these day that I don’t know what to talk about. haha

Dear dad, I haven’t written to you for a long time, and there are too many things have happened these day tolast few days. I don’t know what I to talk,hsay! Haha. Dear dad, I haven’t written to you for a long time, and too many things have happened these last few days. I don’t know what to say! Haha.

I often have a video call with grandma and mom in my free time or after class, t. They are doing fine. I often have a video call with grandma and mom in my free time or after class. They are doing fine.

"They are fine" but adding 'doing' sounds nicer.

But I have to tell you something grievserious. But I have to tell you something serious.

grievous sounds awkward

We adopted another a black-white cat, both of them are cute, but naughty. We adopted another a black-white cat, both of them are cute, but naughty.

We adopted another a black- and white cat, b. Both of them are cute, and naughty. We adopted another black and white cat. Both of them are cute and naughty.

But it was cruel that they are all died painfully in a short time several weeks ago because of rat position, probably, and neither of the two little cats survived. But it was cruel that they are all died painfully in a short time several weeks ago because of rat position, and neither of the two little cats survived.

ButHowever, it was cruel that they are all died painfully in a short time several weeks ago because of rat position, probably, and neither the two little cats survived.several weeks ago they both died painfully because of rat position. However, it was cruel that several weeks ago they both died painfully because of rat position.

If you say that they both died, you don't need to say "neither survived" as well.

Mom failed tocouldn't find the animals hospital,veterinarian, and grandma only could did just saw them off silently and ionly watch them. It was a really a sad night for me. Mom couldn't find the veterinarian, and grandma could only watch them. It was a really sad night for me.

I supper loathate when something passinges away, i. It reminded me of the white cat which had died in front of me long time ago. I hate when something passes away. It reminded me of the white cat which had died in front of me long time ago.

Afterwards grandma always said that she was afraid to check the box (they remains inside it ) ,she consistently. She hoped they just gothad a minor ill,ness and that they would alive anso she could play with therm again. Afterwards grandma always said that she was afraid to check the box (they remain inside it ). She hoped they just had a minor illness and that they would live so she could play with them again.

Afterwards, grandma always said she was always afraid to check the box,(theyir remains were inside it ) ,and she consistently hoped they just got a minor ill,ness and that they would alive and play with her again. Afterwards, grandma said she was always afraid to check the box,(their remains were inside it ) and she consistently hoped they just got a minor illness and that they would live and play with her again.

Grandma haves been missing the momtimes whent she opened the door asnd the two cats squeezing from the crack; missing the moment she did some clean aed through the crack. She is also missing the times when the cats two catsuld disturbed her and played around•••••That’s while she did some cleaning. I should stop talking about it ,because it’s too grievous, e. Everything will be fine , although we’ll miss them forever. Grandma has been missing the times when she opened the door and the two cats squeezed through the crack. She is also missing the times when the cats would disturb her and play around while she did some cleaning. I should stop talking about it because it’s too grievous. Everything will be fine, although we’ll miss them forever.

Dear dad, aAs an English major, it’s quite an interesting thing to learn English. As an English major, it’s quite an interesting thing to learn English.

Dear dad, as an English major, I find it’s quite an interesting thing to learn English. Dear dad, as an English major, I find it quite an interesting thing to learn English.

My grammar teacher and I are good friend, ss. She is friendly and, easygoing, patient, and humorousfunny. My grammar teacher and I are good friends. She is friendly, easygoing, patient, and funny.

Whatever any questions I ask her, she always could teaches me patiently and encourages me a lot: give me the toward, steering me in the right direction. Whatever question I ask her, she always teaches me patiently and encourages me a lot, steering me in the right direction.

Although our foreign teacher haves changed three times, I specifically like this one. Although our foreign teacher has changed three times, I specifically like this one.

He comes from Pakistan and he has a pure anciccent. He comes from Pakistan and he has a pure accent.

What’s more , he always tryies to stay close with us and h. He has lived in China for 3 years , so he can speak Chinese fluently and have a talktalk with us after class in Chinese, haha. What’s more, he always tries to stay close with. He has lived in China for 3 years, so he can speak Chinese fluently and talk with us after class in Chinese, haha.

What’s more ,is that he always tryies to stay closebe friends with us and h. He has lived in China for 3 years , so he can speak Chinese fluently and can have a talk with us after class in Chinese, haha. What’s more is that he always tries to be friends with us. He has lived in China for 3 years, so he can speak Chinese fluently and can have a talk with us after class in Chinese, haha.

The funniest thing is that I came across him on the second floor of the canteen , woreand he was wearing a cap and had concealed his face in the crowd in case someoneso that no one in the crowd would recognized him. The funniest thing is that I came across him on the second floor of the canteen and he was wearing a cap and had concealed his face so that no one in the crowd would recognized him.

However, I still greeted to him. However, I still greeted him.

And then he sat beside us suddenly and ate togetherwith us. And then he sat beside us suddenly and ate with us.

All of my friends couldn’t answered his questions promptly except me ,I could. I had a good communication with him. All of my friends couldn’t answer his questions promptly except me. I had good communication with him.

AllNone of my friends couldn’t answered his questions promptly except me. ,I could hadve a good communicnversation with him. None of my friends could answer his questions promptly except me. I could have a good conversation with him.

Besides that, I often use some apps aapps to chat with people from around the world. Besides that, I often use apps to chat with people from around the world.

Besides that, I often use some apps as to chat with people from around the world. Besides that, I often use some apps to chat with people from around the world.

I met a friend come from Italy, h. He is also found of watching anime and playing video game; in addition, he is learning Chinese and I am learning Englishs. He is also learning Chinese. I met a friend from Italy. He is fond of watching anime and playing video games. He is also learning Chinese.

"and I am learning English" is not relevant to the sentence.

I met a friend come from Italy, he is also found of watching anime and playing video game; is. In addition, he is learning Chinese and I am learning English. I met a friend come from Italy, he is also fond of watching anime and playing video games. In addition, he is learning Chinese and I am learning English.

I sent him a composition I writoten and he corrected it patiently. I sent him a composition I wrote and he corrected it patiently.

I sent him a composition I had written and he corrected it patiently. I sent him a composition I had written and he corrected it patiently.

I’m gladhappy to teach Chinese as well. I’m happy to teach Chinese as well.

I gothave gotten to know many friends around the world. I have gotten to know many friends around the world.

Last time I chatted with a American toso much to my fingers are really hurthurt from typing. Last time I chatted with a American so much my fingers hurt from typing.

I knew about him nearly've know him for about 6 months and I used to often have a video call with him in English, and h often. He will go to the Taiwan for work next month, w. We promised we will meet someday, haha. I've know him for about 6 months and I used to have a video call with him in English often. He will go to the Taiwan for work next month. We promised we will meet someday, haha.

But most of them have a much time difference than us, f. For example:, when I said good morning for him , but, he was going to sleep. But most of them have a much time difference than us. For example, when I said good morning for him, he was going to sleep.

But most of them halive much time differencin a much different time zone than us, f. For example:, when I said good morning forto him , but he was going to sleep. But most of them live in a much different time zone than us. For example, when I said good morning to him he was going to sleep.

By the way, I like to post my English composition to a website, t. There are many friendly people correcteding my mistakes and encourageing me to never give up. By the way, I like to post my English composition to a website. There are many friendly people correcting my mistakes and encouraging me to never give up.

lLikewise , they throughfind learning Chinese is difficult for them. Likewise, they find learning Chinese difficult for them.

There are more and more people starting learn Chinese, but it seems that Chinese is a supper I difficult language. There are more and more people starting learn Chinese, but it seems that Chinese is a super difficult language.

The other thing is that we went out of the school and had a self service barbecue together;, then went the Penglai Pavilion, a national 5A tourist attraction. The other thing is that we went out of the school and had a self service barbecue together, then went the Penglai Pavilion, a national 5A tourist attraction.

The ticket to it was expensive during the busy season, but we entered for free because of our student ID card s! The ticket to it was expensive during the busy season, but we entered for free because of our student ID cards!

The ticket tofor it was expensive during the busy season, but we entered for free because of our student ID card s! The ticket for it was expensive during the busy season, but we entered for free because of our student ID cards!

tThere are qijiguang’s old homes and a lots of old towns, old buildings, and green mountains. There are qijiguang’s old homes and a lots of old towns, old buildings, and green mountains.

Standing on the top of here ,we could feast our eyes foron the ocean, and a large place of golden beach. Standing on the top of here ,we could feast our eyes on the ocean and a large golden beach.

It’s incredible that the simple tall mountain, blue sky, and golden sands could blazing the humanize brilliance. It’s incredible that the simple tall mountain, blue sky, and golden sands could blazing the humanize brilliance.

I don't know what you mean by "blazing the humanize brilliance"

It’s incredible that the simple tall mountain, the blue sky, and the golden sands could blazing the humanizee so brilliance.t. It’s incredible that the tall mountain, the blue sky, and the golden sands could be so brilliant.

NowWhen some light snow wereas falling from the sky, with dancing fell landed on our clothes byfrom the wind. When some light snow was falling from the sky, it landed on our clothes from the wind.

NowThere was some light snow were falling from the sky, with dancing fell onto our clothes by the wind. There was some light snow falling from the sky dancing onto our clothes.

We took a lot of pictures as afor memoryies. We took a lot of pictures for memories.

I rode a self-helpdriving electric car back to school. I rode a self-driving electric car back to school.

Dad, there are too muchany things tohat I can’t tell you all. Dad, there are too many things that I can’t tell you all.

The winter holiday is coming, but we won’t go back to our hometown as usual. The winter holiday is coming, but we won’t go back to our hometown as usual.

Dad, all we want to see is you living happily there, d. Don’t worry about us , we are always waiting for you at home. Dad, all we want to see is you living happily there. Don’t worry about us, we are always waiting for you at home.

I had a call with grandma, and all she said from this year to next year and next year, we couldis that we hope to see you soon! I had a call with grandma, and all she said from this year to next year is that we hope to see you soon!

I had a call with grandma, all she said from this year to nextthat the year andfter next year, we could see you soon! I had a call with grandma, all she said that the year after next we could see you!

I am not sure if you want to say "the year after next" or not. "This year to next year" doesn't make sense.

All she wannats is youfor you to be fine. All she wants is for you to be fine.

Mom cutgave me a new hairstyle: long wavey hair, is beautiful and she. She also showed me many new clothes. Mom gave me a new hairstyle: long wavy hair. She also showed me new clothes.

Mom cut agot new hairstyle: long wavey hair,. It is beautiful and she showtried meon many new clothes to show me. Mom got new hairstyle: long wavy hair. It is beautiful and she tried on many new clothes to show me.

Last time S, she wore a white T-shirt, so brisk and energy, just like a successful woman, haha. Last time, she wore a white T-shirt.

I'm not sure what you mean here.

Dear dad, tThat’s all,. I’ll write to you often!! That’s all. I’ll write to you often!!

Since you said Dear Dad in the beginning, you don't need to say it again.