But when I wore my suit and it was, I had a bad surprise. But when I wore my suit, I had a bad surprise.

Alternatively: "But when I put on my suit, I had a bad surprise." Or maybe, "...I was in for a bad surprise..."

I worehad my suit and it was a bad surprise. I had my suit.

I woretried on my suit and it wasgot a bad surprise. I tried on my suit and got a bad surprise.

I wore my suit and it was a badgot a nasty surprise. I wore my suit and got a nasty surprise.

I woretried on my suit and it was a bad surprisethere was something wrong with it. I tried on my suit and there was something wrong with it.

Saying you “wore” your suit implies that you could wear it.

My suiIt does not fit me. It does not fit me.

This sentence might be better as part of the last sentence: "But when I wore my suit, I was in for a bad surprise: it does not fit me." We're still talking about the suit, so it's more natural to simply say "it". Also, you can leave out the "me" and it will still be understood that it doesn't fit YOU. Example: "I tried to put it on, but it didn't fit."

My suit does noidn't fit me. My suit didn't fit me.

My suit does noidn’t fit me. My suit didn’t fit me.

So, I should to buy a new one. So, I should buy a new one.

So, I shoulneed to buy a new one. So, I need to buy a new one.

or, "I should buy a new one." Note that "should" does not use "to" the way "need" does. "Need to buy" versus "should buy".

So, I should to buy a new one. I should to buy a new one.

So, I should to buy a new one. So, I should buy a new one.

using 'should' is not wrong but does sound ironic. If your suit doesn't fit, you usually *must* buy a new one. If you say "should" it suggests you might choose to show up in your suit that doesn't fit.

SoTherefore, I should to buy a new one. Therefore, I should to buy a new one.

So, I should to buy a new one. So, I should buy a new one.

“To” isn’t needed here.

I have the hope tohat I will find an offer before sSaturday. I have hope that I will find an offer before Saturday.

I have the'm hopeing to find an offer before sSaturday. I'm hoping to find an offer before Saturday.

Days of the week, like Saturday, are always capitalized in English. So are months and holidays.

I have the hope to find an offero buy a new one before saturday. I have to buy a new one before saturday.

I have the hope to find an offersomething before sSaturday. I have the hope to find something before Saturday.

'an offer' isn't used in this situation usually

I have the hope to find an offerone on sale before saturday. I hope to find one on sale before saturday.

I have the hope to find an offer suit before sSaturday. I hope to find a suit before Saturday.

You need to capitalize the days of the week.

Tuesday Tuesday

Why did you name it Tuesday?

This weekend, I am going to a wedding. This weekend, I am going to a wedding.

This weekend, I amwill be going to a wedding. This weekend, I will be going to a wedding.

More detail, maybe? Good, though.