It’s about attackings to Gazathe city of Gaza by Israel's military forces. It’s attacks to the city of Gaza by Israel's military forces.

It’s about an attacking to on a Gaza city by Israeli military forces. It’s about an attack on a Gaza city by Israeli military forces.

1. “It’s about attacking” is not correct. You should say “it’s about an attack” instead 2. If you are referring to people from a certain country or continent, you need to call them by their nationality, not the country. For example, people from America are called “Americans”, people from Japan are “Japanese” and people from Israel are “Israelis”

It has been continued for nearly two years. It continued for nearly two years.

It has been continuedhappening/going on for nearly two years. It has been happening/going on for nearly two years.

These words sound more natural

Honestly, I predicted that this war willould end immediately when it started by Hamas. Honestly, I predicted that this war would end immediately when it started by Hamas.

Honestly, I predictedthought that thise war willould end immediately when it started by Hamas. Honestly, I thought that the war would end immediately when it started by Hamas.

“I thought” sounds more natural than “I predicted”

That’s because their military balances arepower is not equal. That’s because their military power is not equal.

Personally, I strongly requdesire them to stop this war whatich has no meaning. Personally, I strongly desire them to stop this war which has no meaning.

Personally, I strongly require them tobelieve they should stop this war wthat has no meaning. Personally, I strongly believe they should stop this war that has no meaning.

1. Requiring something means you need something, and sounds unnatural here. A better way to say this would be that you believe they should stop 2. The word “what” is used wrong here. “That” should be used instead