March 16, 2021
A Snack
Karintou is a Japanese traditional snack. It's fried dough cookies covered with honey. However, the shape is cylindrical and the color is brown, so it looks like something dirty. I found a short video that a cat misunderstood the snack as his poo, and tried to hide it.
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Karintou is a Japanese traditional Japanese snack.
Karintou is a traditonal Japanese snack.
The order of adjectives in English is something which seems like it shouldn't matter, but if you get it wrong, it instantly sounds weird and non-native.
It's fried dough cookiescookie dough covered with honey.
It's fried cookie dough covered with honey.
I found a short video thatwhere a cat misunderstoodk the snack as his poo, and tried to hide it.
I found a short video where a cat mistook the snack as his poo, and tried to hide it.
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Mostly small mistakes, so good writing overall. Do you have a link to the cat video?
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A Snack |
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Karintou is a Japanese traditional snack.
Karintou is a The order of adjectives in English is something which seems like it shouldn't matter, but if you get it wrong, it instantly sounds weird and non-native. |
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It's fried dough cookies covered with honey.
It's fried |
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However, the shape is cylindrical and the color is brown, so it looks like something dirty. |
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I found a short video that a cat misunderstood the snack as his poo, and tried to hide it.
I found a short video |
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