Dec. 8, 2020
The way to relieve from stress
The ways to get away from pressure are numerous. My approaches to relieving stress are as follows.
To begin with, sparing time with families is a good method to address this problem. Since family members are of great significance to individuals, no matter what happens, they will always be there for you. For example, if a person encounters difficulties which impose considerable burdens on them, they can resort to their families by staying with them and talking to them. In this case, people who suffer from stress may get spiritual consolation, as they know there is someone always back them.
What is more, to do something ones like is conducive to getting over nervousness and tiredness. No matter how much stress they have from work or study, everything will recede to temporary tranquility once they immerse themselves into something they really into, like hobbies and sports. A good example of this is that some people tend to do some extreme sports to give their exhausted nerves a break, such as bungee jumping, in which all senses are overwhelmed by excitement, thus helping them ease their nervousness, enjoying the beauty of nature and the feeling of agravity. After experience on the edge of death, something they can not handle before may not be as invincible as they thought.
In conclusion, I assert that spending time with family serves as a placebo, together with doing something they are fond of also helps to alleviate or eradicate pressure as they indulge themselves in it.
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The wayHow to relieve yourself from stress
How to relieve yourself from stress
The ways to get awayrelieve yourself from pressure are numerous.
The ways to relieve yourself from pressure are numerous.
My approaches to relieving stress areis as follows.
My approach to relieving stress is as follows.
To begin with, sparending time with your familiesy is a good methodway to address this problem.
To begin with, spending time with your family is a good way to address this problem.
Since family members are of great significance to individuals, no matter what happens, they will always be there for you.
In this case, people who suffer from stress may get spiritual consolation, as they know there is someone always backy will always have someone to support them.
In this case, people who suffer from stress may get spiritual consolation, as they know they will always have someone to support them.
What is more, to dodoing something ones likes is conducive to getting over nervousness and tiredness.
What is more, doing something one likes is conducive to getting over nervousness and tiredness.
No matter how much stress they have from work or study, everything will recede to temporary tranquility once they immerse themselves into something they are really into, likesuch as hobbies and sports.
No matter how much stress they have from work or study, everything will recede to temporary tranquility once they immerse themselves in something they are really into, such as hobbies and sports.
A good example of this is that some people tend to do some extreme sports to give their exhausted nerves a break, such as bungee jumping, in which all senses are overwhelmed by excitement, thus helping them ease their nervousness, enjoying the beauty of nature and the feeling of agravity.
In conclusion, I assert that spending time with family serves as a placebo, which together with doing something they areone is fond of alsodoing, helps to alleviate or eradicate pressure as they one indulge themselves in it.s oneself therein.
In conclusion, I assert that spending time with family serves as a placebo, which together with doing something one is fond of doing, helps to alleviate or eradicate pressure as one indulges oneself therein.
Dec. 12, 2020
What is more, to dodoing something ones likes is conducive to getting over nervousness and tiredness.
Thank you for your review, but why I can’t use “to do “and why I can’t use plural “ones “?
Dec. 12, 2020
In conclusion, I assert that spending time with family serves as a placebo, which together with doing something they areone is fond of alsodoing, helps to alleviate or eradicate pressure as they one indulge themselves in it.s oneself therein.
Hi, I am wondering why I need to add” which “, “doing”and “,”
Dec. 12, 2020
You need to use 'doing' here because of the word 'conducive'. It's literally the 'doing' of the thing that makes it conducive to something else. The infinitive 'to do' sounds awkward in this context, and unpolished.
Dec. 12, 2020
1. You need a comma here to close out the second part of the sentence since you introduced a new thought block beginning with 'together'.
2. You need the second 'doing' because you can't close it off with just 'fond of'. It doesn't sound right if you were to leave it out.
3. You cannot use 'together' in this context without putting 'and' or 'which' before it. Without 'and' or 'which', 'together' is usually the first word of a sentence, or after a semi colon.
4. You don't need 'also' when you already have 'together'. 'Together' already gets that across here.
Dec. 12, 2020
I get it, thank you so much~
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The way to relieve from stress
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The ways to get away from pressure are numerous.
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My approaches to relieving stress are as follows.
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To begin with, sparing time with families is a good method to address this problem.
To begin with, sp |
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Since family members are of great significance to individuals, no matter what happens, they will always be there for you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example, if a person encounters difficulties which impose considerable burdens on them, they can resort to their families by staying with them and talking to them. |
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In this case, people who suffer from stress may get spiritual consolation, as they know there is someone always back them.
In this case, people who suffer from stress may get spiritual consolation, as they know the |
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What is more, to do something ones like is conducive to getting over nervousness and tiredness.
What is more, |
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No matter how much stress they have from work or study, everything will recede to temporary tranquility once they immerse themselves into something they really into, like hobbies and sports.
No matter how much stress they have from work or study, everything will recede to temporary tranquility once they immerse themselves in |
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A good example of this is that some people tend to do some extreme sports to give their exhausted nerves a break, such as bungee jumping, in which all senses are overwhelmed by excitement, thus helping them ease their nervousness, enjoying the beauty of nature and the feeling of agravity. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After experience on the edge of death, something they can not handle before may not be as invincible as they thought. |
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In conclusion, I assert that spending time with family serves as a placebo, together with doing something they are fond of also helps to alleviate or eradicate pressure as they indulge themselves in it.
In conclusion, I assert that spending time with family |
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