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“Gossip Girl” is a title of a TV series, so both words should be capitalised because it’s a proper noun.

Please correct me and write how cantell me how I change some words to more difficult use more advanced words. Please correct me and tell me how I can use more advanced words.

The phrase “write how can I change” is incorrect word order for an indirect question. It should be “tell me how I can change.” “More difficult words” is understandable but sounds awkward. When talking about vocabulary, we usually say “more advanced words.”

I recently watched a series about drama and gossips in richthe world of wealthy teenage worldrs. I recently watched a series about drama and gossip in the world of wealthy teenagers.

“Watch” should be “watched” to match the past time expression “recently.” “Gossips” is incorrect because “gossip” is uncountable in English. The phrase “rich teenage world” sounds unnatural. It’s clearer and more formal to say “the world of wealthy teenagers.”

The actionstory is set up inin the USA. The story is set in the USA.

We use “set in” for stories, not “set up in.” We need “the” before “USA”, because “USA” is a proper noun that requires the article “the.”

There aren'isn’t one main character, but a fewseveral. There isn’t one main character, but several.

“Aren’t” is used for plurals, but here you are referring to one character, so the correct form is “isn’t.” The phrase “a few” is fine, but “several” sounds a bit more advanced and fits the sentence well.

All history of their life write some secret bloger secret blogger writes about their entire lives. A secret blogger writes about their entire lives.

The sentence has incorrect word order and verb agreement. “Write” should be “writes” because the subject is singular (a blogger). “All history of their life” is awkward — it’s more natural to say “their entire lives.” “Bloger” is misspelled — it should be “blogger.”

I like this series, because I likeenjoy gossips and because this series is happy about the popularthe show focuses on popularity and drama. I like this series because I enjoy gossip and the show focuses on popularity and drama.

The comma after “series” is not needed here. Again, “gossips” should be “gossip” — it’s uncountable. The phrase “is happy about the popular” is unclear and grammatically incorrect. You probably meant “focuses on popularity” or something similar. The sentence was a bit repetitive with “because…because,” so we simplified it for smoother flow.