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kikokun

Feb. 4, 2026

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Cafes in Prague

It’s finally two weeks until we go to the Czech Republic.
While staying in Prague, I’m thinking about which cafes to stop by for a break. Looking through the guidebooks, all the cafés seem to have tantalizing sweets that I’d like to try as many as possible. Though in reality, that might be impossible.


チェコに行くのに二週間となった。プラハ滞在中に、どこのカフェで休憩しようか考えています。ガイドブックを見ると、スウィーツが魅力的なカフェばかりなので、できるかぎりいろいろ味わってみたいと思っています。実際には無理かもしれませんが。

魅力的なカフェ
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Cafes in Prague

It’s finalonly two weeks until we go to the Czech Republic.

While staying in Prague, I’m thinking about which cafes to stop by for a break.

Looking through the guidebooks, all the cafés seem to have tantalizing sweets that I’d like to try as many as possible.

Though in reality, that might be impossible.

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kikokun

Feb. 5, 2026

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Thank you!!!

Cafes in Prague

It’s finally twojust two more weeks until we finally go to the Czech Republic.

The placement of "finally" before the main action "go to the..." is the only correction here that I think really matters.

While staying in Prague, I’m thinking about which cafes to stop by for a break while staying in Prague.

Looking through the guidebooks, all the cafés seem to have tantalizing sweets that, and I’d like to try as many as possible.

Spellcheckers will usually insist that café needs the accent on the é, but standard English keyboard layouts don't have access to the ´ character needed to put the accent there, so personally I think either spelling should be acceptable.

Though in reality, that might be impossible.

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Overall, nicely written. Have fun on your trip!

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kikokun

Feb. 8, 2026

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Thank you for your corrections.

While staying in Prague, I’m thinking about which cafes to stop by for a break in Prague / when we are in Prague.

You aren't actually there yet, so starting the sentence the way you did is a little confusing.

Looking throughIn the guidebooks, all the cafés seem to have tantalizing sweets that, and I’d like to try as many as possible.
In the guidebooks all the cafés seem to have tantalizing sweets that I’d like to try.

It is tricky to start a sentence with a participial phrase; but when you do, the subject should be stated right after the comma. So, your sentence might be revised this way: "Looking through the guidebooks, I see that..." However, there really is no need for all the extra words.

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This is a great topic to write about. Keep it up!

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kikokun

Feb. 5, 2026

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Thank you for your corrections. I used the word"tantalizing" at the first time.

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Liag

Feb. 5, 2026

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You used it very well, especially because you end by saying you probably won't get what you want.

As you may know, the word is based on the story of Tantalus from Ancient Greek mythology. He was punished by the gods. They made him stand in water he could never drink under the fruit of trees he could not reach.

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kikokun

Feb. 8, 2026

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Thank you. I never know the story of Tantalus.

Cafes in Prague


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It’s finally two weeks until we go to the Czech Republic.


It’s finally twojust two more weeks until we finally go to the Czech Republic.

The placement of "finally" before the main action "go to the..." is the only correction here that I think really matters.

It’s finalonly two weeks until we go to the Czech Republic.

While staying in Prague, I’m thinking about which cafes to stop by for a break.


While staying in Prague, I’m thinking about which cafes to stop by for a break in Prague / when we are in Prague.

You aren't actually there yet, so starting the sentence the way you did is a little confusing.

While staying in Prague, I’m thinking about which cafes to stop by for a break while staying in Prague.

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Looking through the guidebooks, all the cafés seem to have tantalizing sweets that I’d like to try as many as possible.


Looking throughIn the guidebooks, all the cafés seem to have tantalizing sweets that, and I’d like to try as many as possible.
In the guidebooks all the cafés seem to have tantalizing sweets that I’d like to try.

It is tricky to start a sentence with a participial phrase; but when you do, the subject should be stated right after the comma. So, your sentence might be revised this way: "Looking through the guidebooks, I see that..." However, there really is no need for all the extra words.

Looking through the guidebooks, all the cafés seem to have tantalizing sweets that, and I’d like to try as many as possible.

Spellcheckers will usually insist that café needs the accent on the é, but standard English keyboard layouts don't have access to the ´ character needed to put the accent there, so personally I think either spelling should be acceptable.

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Though in reality, that might be impossible.


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