Aug. 22, 2025
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Looking back on life, everyone has regrets, but when we know that we have things to regret, the things have already gone. It seems like we can't know that we have things to regret while the things are taking place, which is the funny part of life. It may also be the amazing part of life at the same time.
Nevertheless, it's not a big deal. Humans are also a kind of animal. Similar to cattle and horses, we are also like dust.
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Looking back on life, everyone has regrets, b. But when we know that we have things to regret, the things have already gone.
Looking back on life, everyone has regrets. But when we know that we have things to regret, the things have already gone.
The sentence is very long, I separated it into two sentences for clarity.
It seems like we can'’t know that we have things tosee our regrets while the things are taking placeit is happening, which is the funny part of life.
It seems like we can’t see our regrets while it is happening, which is the funny part of life.
This sentence sounds a little awkward, so it is hard to understand what you are saying. I don’t know what “things” is in this sentence.
“we can’t see” ==> sounds more natural than “know”
“our regrets” ==> I changed “things to regret” to “regrets” to make it easier to understand. Regret can be a noun or a verb, so I used it as a verb in this sentence. The “things” that people can regret is not as important or clear as the “regret” in your sentence, so that is why I removed it.
“while the things are taking place” ==> It is not clear what are the “things” and what is “taking place”. (I know you mean “things to regret” but it is not clear what is being regretted.) I changed it to “while it is happening” to show that we do not see what we will regret in that period of time. You could also change “while it is happening” to be “in the moment” instead, but I don’t want to change your sentence too much.
It may also be the amazing part of life at the same time.
Nevertheless, it's not a big deal.
Humans are also a kind of animal.
Similar to cattle and horses, we are also like dust.
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Interesting to read! Very good job. I hope I am clear enough in my corrections.
Aug. 24, 2025
Thank you very much.
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It seems like we can't know that we will have regrets while they are taking place, which is a funny part of life.
a instead of the. In this context, the makes it sound like it is the only funny part of life.
It may also be thean amazing part of life at the same time.
It may also be an amazing part of life at the same time.
An instead of the. Same reason as the edit above.
NeverthelessEither way, it's not a big deal.
Either way, it's not a big deal.
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To be honest, except maybe a few word choices I pointed out, your grammar and sentence structure was good. So I tried to focus on making it sound a little more..I guess conversational? It flows a little more smoothly now, at least in my opinion. They way it was written before comes off stiff. Almost like reading a report. Which I don't think would be environment for sharing your random thoughts to someone. If I overstepped, I would only focus on the sentences I left feedback on.
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Looking back on life, everyone has regrets, but when we know that we have things to regret, the things have already gone.
Looking back on life, everyone has regrets, but
Looking back on life, everyone has regrets The sentence is very long, I separated it into two sentences for clarity. |
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It seems like we can't know that we have things to regret while the things are taking place, which is the funny part of life.
It seems like we can't know that we a instead of the. In this context, the makes it sound like it is the only funny part of life.
It seems like we can This sentence sounds a little awkward, so it is hard to understand what you are saying. I don’t know what “things” is in this sentence. “we can’t see” ==> sounds more natural than “know” “our regrets” ==> I changed “things to regret” to “regrets” to make it easier to understand. Regret can be a noun or a verb, so I used it as a verb in this sentence. The “things” that people can regret is not as important or clear as the “regret” in your sentence, so that is why I removed it. “while the things are taking place” ==> It is not clear what are the “things” and what is “taking place”. (I know you mean “things to regret” but it is not clear what is being regretted.) I changed it to “while it is happening” to show that we do not see what we will regret in that period of time. You could also change “while it is happening” to be “in the moment” instead, but I don’t want to change your sentence too much. |
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It may also be the amazing part of life at the same time.
It may also be An instead of the. Same reason as the edit above. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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