July 12, 2023
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Q1: Strategically speaking, what benefits do you think EY International would gain from
your firm’s incorporation into the EY network?
A1: Mr Jones is a former tax inspector and executive manager in The Ministry of Finance. He has ability to estimate the way tax authority manages an issues. JC LLC hires different professionals such as Social Security Area, Trade Regulations, HR, Law other than accounting and taxation. Additionally, since he is a former tax inspector, he gets in touch with many public officals easily if needed.
Q2: Please indicate specific expectations your firm would have if to become EY members.
A2: We would be happy to be member of one of reputable accounting network. To become member of the organization would bring reputation, the reputation brings new potential clients into our company. We will be more aware of the International Taxation.
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Q1: Strategically speaking, what benefits do you think EY International would gain from your firm’s incorporation into the EY network?
A1: Mr Jones is a former tax inspector and executive manager in The Ministry of Finance.
He has the ability to estimate the way [that the] tax authority manages an issues.
He has the ability to estimate the way [that the] tax authority manages issues.
It should either be 'an issue' or 'issues', depending on the number of issues.
'that the' is optional, but more grammatically correct. Even when omitting the 'that' I would personally still write 'the authority'.
JC LLC hires different professionals such as Social Security Area, Trade Regulations, HR, Law other than accounting and taxation.
Additionally, since he is a former tax inspector, he can gets in touch with many public officials easily if needed.
Additionally, since he is a former tax inspector, he can get in touch with many public officials easily if needed.
Since this is a statement about his abilities, you use 'can'.
If it was an action that he does regularly it would be 'gets' (or any other verb).
Q2: Please indicate specific expectations your firm would have if it were to become an EY members.
Q2: Please indicate specific expectations your firm would have if it were to become an EY member.
'EY member' should be in the singular, since 'your firm' is a single object.
'if it were' - since this is a conditional expression. Alternatively, you may use 'if it became an EY member'. Both are correct.
A2: We would be happy to be a member of one ofa reputable accounting network.
A2: We would be happy to be a member of one a reputable accounting network.
To become a member of the organization would bring reputation, and the reputation brings new potential clients into our company. To become a member of the organization would bring reputation, and the reputation brings new potential clients into our company.
We will be more aware of the Iinternational Ttaxation.
We will be more aware of international taxation.
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He has ability to estimate the way tax authority manages an issues.
He has the ability to estimate the way [that the] tax authority manages It should either be 'an issue' or 'issues', depending on the number of issues. 'that the' is optional, but more grammatically correct. Even when omitting the 'that' I would personally still write 'the authority'. |
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JC LLC hires different professionals such as Social Security Area, Trade Regulations, HR, Law other than accounting and taxation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Additionally, since he is a former tax inspector, he gets in touch with many public officals easily if needed.
Additionally, since he is a former tax inspector, he can get Since this is a statement about his abilities, you use 'can'. If it was an action that he does regularly it would be 'gets' (or any other verb). |
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Q2: Please indicate specific expectations your firm would have if to become EY members.
Q2: Please indicate specific expectations your firm would have if it were to become an EY member 'EY member' should be in the singular, since 'your firm' is a single object. 'if it were' - since this is a conditional expression. Alternatively, you may use 'if it became an EY member'. Both are correct. |
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A2: We would be happy to be member of one of reputable accounting network.
A2: We would be happy to be a member of one |
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To become member of the organization would bring reputation, the reputation brings new potential clients into our company. To become a member of the organization would bring reputation, and the reputation brings new potential clients into our company. To become a member of the organization would bring reputation, and the reputation brings new potential clients into our company. |
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We will be more aware of the International Taxation.
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