Dec. 12, 2020
If you had all the money of the world to invest...
If you had all the money of the world to invest in a business, What would you do? I’m teacher and I always have thought to finish with the textbooks would be good to the humankind :-). I’m thinking about the ‘traditional’ textbook, naturally. I would like to create a new editorial for change the traditional textbook.
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If you had all the money in the world to invest...
If you had all the money ofin the world to invest in a business, Wwhat would you do?
If you had all the money in the world to invest in a business, what would you do?
(1) "All the X in the world" is a set expression.
(2) This is a single sentence, so "what" should not be capitalized.
I’m a teacher, and I always have thought to finish with thehat getting rid of textbooks would be good to thefor humankind :-).
I’m a teacher, and I always have thought that getting rid of textbooks would be good for humankind :-).
I would like to create a new editorial for changeing the traditional textbook.
I would like to create a new editorial for changing the traditional textbook.
What do you mean by "editorial"? Do you mean something having to do with editing? Or do you mean "an essay expressing a point of view", which is the traditional meaning of "editorial" (as in "I read an interesting editorial about the election in today's newspaper")?
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I'd be interested in seeing your ideas. I hope that you'll describe them in other posts.
Dec. 19, 2020
Sorry for the delay. When I write ‘editorial’ I meant the company that publishes the books
Dec. 19, 2020
Thanks very much for your corrections
Dec. 20, 2020
Sorry for the delay. When I write ‘editorial’ I meant the company that publishes the books
Then you would want to say "publishing company".
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If you had all the money of the world to invest in a business, What would you do?
If you had all the money (1) "All the X in the world" is a set expression. (2) This is a single sentence, so "what" should not be capitalized. |
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I’m teacher and I always have thought to finish with the textbooks would be good to the humankind :-).
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I’m thinking about the ‘traditional’ textbook, naturally. |
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I would like to create a new editorial for change the traditional textbook.
I would like to create a new editorial for chang What do you mean by "editorial"? Do you mean something having to do with editing? Or do you mean "an essay expressing a point of view", which is the traditional meaning of "editorial" (as in "I read an interesting editorial about the election in today's newspaper")? |
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