Jan. 26, 2024
I wrote this after reading the article.
Edward Drinker Code and Othniel Charles Marsh were friends in 1868. They studied of dinosaurs fossil together. But one day Code made a mistake when he was splicing dinosaurs code. He put the skull on the skeleton’s tail rather the neck. And Marsh made fun of this mistake. Cope was hurt so he became an enemy to Marsh. Cope told newspapers about the bad things Marsh ever did. They cheated on their work because they wanted to win. So they blew up dig spot when they are done the research. All the things they did was because of that disagreement. Both of them died in the late 1890s.
I wrote this after reading thean article.
Edward Drinker Code and Othniel Charles Marsh were friends in 1868.
They studied of dinosaurs fossil together.
But one day Code made a mistake when he was splicing dinosaurs code.
He put the skull on the skeleton’s tail rather than the neck.
And Marsh made fun of this mistake.
Cope was hurt so he became an enemy to Marsh.
Cope told newspapers about all the bad things Marsh ever did.
They cheated on their work because they wanted to win.
So they blew up the dig spot when they awere done with the research.
All the things they did was because of that disagreement.
Both of them died in the late 1890s.
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Sad story but you wrote well! :)
Jan. 28, 2024
Thank you! !
I wrote this after reading thean article.
the requires the audience to know the topic
They studied of dinosaurs fossils together.
But one day Code made a mistake when he was splicing dinosaur's code.
This sentence doesn't really make sense so I only fixed the grammar. I think you mean completely different words here, try using a machine translation here because "code" sounds like genes in this context.
He put the skull on the skeleton’s tail rather than the neck.
And, Marsh made fun of this mistake.
starting a sentence with And we use a comma. That said, I would have written something like "So," rather than And here.
Cope was hurt so he became an enemy toturned against Marsh.
this cause and effect is a little wrong sounding
Cope told newspapers about all the bad things Marsh ever did.
all the...ever is a form to use again
They had cheated on their work because they wanted to win.
win what? do you mean succeed? win requires a competition or competitive spirit.
So they blew up dig spotite when they are donefinished the research.
dig-site is its own word I think
All the things they did waThey did many things because of that disagreement.
This sentence feels isolated from the above
Both of them died in the late 1890s, without having made up.
I think you might want to resolve this so I added an example that's not a correction per se. This end feels very abrupt.
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This is a good idea, I should also write article summaries haha.
I think some of your mistakes you could catch if you wrote in something like Google docs where it will catch common grammatical errors, it may save you some time to use a word editor so you can focus on connecting sentences more naturally.
Jan. 28, 2024
🥹🥹Thank you!!
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But one day Code made a mistake when he was splicing dinosaurs code. But one day Code made a mistake when he was splicing dinosaur's code. This sentence doesn't really make sense so I only fixed the grammar. I think you mean completely different words here, try using a machine translation here because "code" sounds like genes in this context. But one day Code made a mistake when he was splicing dinosaur |
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He put the skull on the skeleton’s tail rather the neck. He put the skull on the skeleton’s tail rather than the neck. He put the skull on the skeleton’s tail rather than the neck. |
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And Marsh made fun of this mistake. And, Marsh made fun of this mistake. starting a sentence with And we use a comma. That said, I would have written something like "So," rather than And here.
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Cope was hurt so he became an enemy to Marsh. Cope was hurt so he this cause and effect is a little wrong sounding This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Cope told newspapers about the bad things Marsh ever did. Cope told newspapers about all the bad things Marsh ever did. all the...ever is a form to use again Cope told newspapers about all the bad things Marsh ever did. |
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They cheated on their work because they wanted to win. They had cheated on their work because they wanted to win. win what? do you mean succeed? win requires a competition or competitive spirit. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So they blew up dig spot when they are done the research. So they blew up dig s dig-site is its own word I think So they blew up the dig spot when they |
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All the things they did was because of that disagreement.
This sentence feels isolated from the above This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Both of them died in the late 1890s. Both of them died in the late 1890s, without having made up. I think you might want to resolve this so I added an example that's not a correction per se. This end feels very abrupt. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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