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BlackGlasses

Oct. 17, 2022

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If you could go anywhere in the world during the summer, where would you go? Why?
I would like to go to Japan in the summer

I think that Japan is a beautiful place to live in, no matter what station it's but in the summer would be awoseme to be in Japan, with someone special and share together our happy moments.

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I would like to go to Japan in the summer

I think that Japan is a beautiful place to live in, no matter what statieason it's is, but in the summer it would be awoseesome to be in Japan, with someone special and share together our happy moments together.

This is kind of a run on sentence, so you could divide it this way:

I think that Japan is a beautiful place to live, no matter what season it is. But (or, However), in the summer it would be awesome to be in Japan with someone special and share our happy moments together.

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I agree! Japan is lovely in summer.

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BlackGlasses

Oct. 18, 2022

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I think that Japan is a beautiful place to live in, no matter what statieason it's is, but in the summer it would be awoseesome to be in Japan, with someone special and share together our happy moments together.

Thank you so much! I will use your advice.

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I would like to go to Japan in the summer

I think that Japan is a beautiful place to live in, no matter what station it'sthe season, but in the summer it would be awoseesome to be in Japan, with someone special and to share together our happy moments together.

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aedw

Oct. 17, 2022

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Good work!

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BlackGlasses

Oct. 18, 2022

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Good work!

Thank youu! I don't know how to express how grateful I am because you're correcting me.

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aedw

Oct. 18, 2022

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Thank youu! I don't know how to express how grateful I am because you're correcting me.

You're welcome:)

I would like to go to Japan in the summer

I would like to go to Japan in the summer

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I think that Japan is a beautiful place to live in, no matter what station it's but in the summer would be awoseme to be in Japan, with someone special and share together our happy moments.

I think that Japan is a beautiful place to live in, no matter what station it'sthe season, but in the summer it would be awoseesome to be in Japan, with someone special and to share together our happy moments together.

I think that Japan is a beautiful place to live in, no matter what statieason it's is, but in the summer it would be awoseesome to be in Japan, with someone special and share together our happy moments together.

This is kind of a run on sentence, so you could divide it this way: I think that Japan is a beautiful place to live, no matter what season it is. But (or, However), in the summer it would be awesome to be in Japan with someone special and share our happy moments together.

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