Aug. 23, 2022
Almost three years ago I watched a movie called "Your Name" from Makoto Shinkai. "Your Name" made me cry like any other movie in my life. I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them. The end is very realistic because they don't end together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward . Stories about separation, growing up, adolescense and love have captivated my attention and my heart. I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood like Makoto Shinkai's movies made me feel. But first of all to show my love for nature. I really like to finish my posts with haikus, so here they are:
Spring clouds keep moving.
Now we should separate and....
Start moving too.
The jacaranda tree
Where we used to lunch together
Is in bloom but lonely.
I would like to be a writer
Almost three years ago I watched a movie called "Your Name" from Makoto Shinkai.
"Your Name" made me cry like any other movie in my life.
I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl whom he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them.
The end is very realistic because they don't end up together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward .
Stories about separation, growing up, adolescense and love have captivated my attention and my heart.
I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood like Makoto Shinkai's movies made me feel.
But first of all to show my love for nature.
I would really like to finish my posts with haikus, so here they ar’s one:
Spring clouds keep moving.
Now we should separate and....
Start moving too.
The jacaranda tree
Where we used to lunch together
Is in bloom but lonely.
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Gorgeous haiku and gorgeous movie, haven’t seen it (thanks for spoiling!) not mad though haha, fantastic work
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I really like to finish my posts with haikus, so here they are:.
Spring clouds keep moving.
Now we should separate and....
Start moving too.
The jacaranda tree
Where we used to lunch together
Is in bloom but lonely.
Feedback
Nice work!
"Your Name" made me cry unlike any other movie in my life.
Using "like" means that the movie was similar to other movies you had watched. "Unlike" means that it was special.
I've had started watching the films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", it is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them.
"have" means to possess something. Using "had" means you were already watching Makoto Shinkai's films before you found the movie.
The end is very realistic because they don't end together, and the lesson is: Nothing lasts forever, but we must keep moving forward .
last should be plural
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Overall, the text was well written with some minor mistakes. Despite this, I could easily understand it.
Almost three years ago I watched a movie called "Your Name" fromby Makoto Shinkai.
"Your Name" made me cry like anyno other movie in my life.
I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", which is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them.
The end is very realistic because they don't end up together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward .
Stories about separation, growing up, adolescense and love have captivated my attention and my heart.
I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood like Makoto Shinkai's movies made me feel.
But first of all to show my love for nature.
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Beautiful and enjoyable to read :) just a couple of corrections here and there
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Almost three years ago, I watched a movie called "Your Name" fromby Makoto Shinkai.
"Your Name" made me cry like anyno other movie has in my life.
Any other movie = all movies have made you cry, and "Your Name" is just another one of those movies
No other movie = not many movies have you made you cry, and "Your Name" is one of the exceptions
I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai's films when I discovered another movie that made me cry,. "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated (them/the two).
The end is very realistic because they don't end up together, and t. The lesson is: N that nothing last forever, but we must keep on moving forward anyway.
Stories about separation, growing up, adolescensce and love have captivated my attention and moved my heart.
I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood like Makoto Shinkai's movies have made me feel.
But first of all, to show my love for nature., I will leave you all with a haiku.
Should be a complete sentence, so I gave a suggestion for how to end it.
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Really lovely entry!
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Almost three years ago I watched a movie called "Your Name" fromby Makoto Shinkai.
"Your Name" made me cry likemore than any other movie in my lifeI had ever seen.
I've started watching (more) films ofby Makoto Shinkai when, and I discovered another movie that made me cry,. "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood, but. However, because life separated the two of them, now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them.
Watch out for run-on sentences!
The end is very realistic because they don't end up together, and t. The lesson is: Nnothing lasts forever but regardless we must keep moving forward .
Stories about separation, growing up, adolescensce and love have always moved me and captivated my attention and my heart.
Hearts can't be captivated in english.
I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood likepeople can relate to and understand in a way similar to how Makoto Shinkai's movies madke me feel.
Yo me identifico con = I relate to. You can say "I identify with" but usually that's more when talking about other people.
But first of all to showOf course, I'd also love to show (write about?) my love for nature.
I really like to finish my posts with haikus, so here they are:
haha! :)
Spring clouds keep moving.
Now we should separate and....
Start moving too.
The jacaranda tree
Where we used to lunch together
Is in bloom but lonely.
Feedback
Good work!
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Almost three years ago I watched a movie called "Your Name" from Makoto Shinkai. Almost three years ago I watched a movie called "Your Name" Almost three years ago, I watched a movie called "Your Name" Almost three years ago I watched a movie called "Your Name" Almost three years ago I watched a movie called We underline names of movies. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
"Your Name" made me cry like any other movie in my life. "Your Name" made me cry "Your Name" made me cry like Any other movie = all movies have made you cry, and "Your Name" is just another one of those movies No other movie = not many movies have you made you cry, and "Your Name" is one of the exceptions "Your Name" made me cry like "Your Name" made me cry unlike any other movie in my life. Using "like" means that the movie was similar to other movies you had watched. "Unlike" means that it was special.
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I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered a another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them. |
The end is very realistic because they don't end together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward . The end is very realistic because they don't end up together The end is very realistic because they don't end up together The end is very realistic because they don't end up together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward . The end is very realistic because they don't end together, and the lesson is: Nothing lasts forever, but we must keep moving forward last should be plural The end is very realistic because they don't end up together The end is very realistic because they don't end up together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward . |
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I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood like Makoto Shinkai's movies made me feel. I would like to write stories that Yo me identifico con = I relate to. You can say "I identify with" but usually that's more when talking about other people. I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood like Makoto Shinkai's movies have made me feel. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I would like to write stories This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
But first of all to show my love for nature.
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I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them. I've started watching (more) films Watch out for run-on sentences! I've started watching I I "have" means to possess something. Using "had" means you were already watching Makoto Shinkai's films before you found the movie. I've started watching films I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl whom he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them. |
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