June 20, 2020
I will write a diary from today！
I'm going to write a diary from today. Output the words I have learned to improve my English in a diary. If there is something wrong with the grammar, please point it out.
I would like to introduce myself a little. I am a college student and live in Osaka. Originally I was planning to go to study abroad in Australia from March of this year, but I can't study abroad because of the influence of corona⤵︎ So I want to connect with many people through this diary！Today I studied with friends at Starbucks. I will write my diary tomorrow, so please comment and correct diary grammar！
今日から日記を書こうと思います。英語を上達するために、覚えた単語などを日記にアウトプットしようと思います。文法がおかしいとこがあれば、なおしてください。
すこし、自己紹介をしようと思います。私は大学生で、大阪に住んでいます。本来は今年の3月からオーストラリアへ留学に行く予定でしたが、コロナの影響で行けなくなりました⤵︎だから、この日記を使って、たくさんの人と繋がりたいと思います！今日はスターバックスで友達と勉強をしました。明日も日記を書くので、良かったらコメント、日記の添削をしてください！
I will write a diary fromjournal starting today！
"Diary" sounds more personal. It's usually something you don't share with others. "Journal" doesn't have that feeling.
I'm going to write a diary fromjournal starting today.
"Starting" means you are in the process of beginning something. It is more natural to say "starting today" than "from today" in this sentence.
Other ways to say this:
"Starting today, I am going to write a journal."
"From this point on, I'm going to write a journal."
"I'm going to write a journal from this point on."
OutputI will use the words that I have learned to improve my English in a diary.
"Output" means you are making a certain amount of something.
"I will (verb)" means you are going to do something in the future.
I am a college student and I live in Osaka.
You can also say: "I am a college student who lives in Osaka."
Originally I was planning to go to study abroad in Australia fromin March of this year, but I can't study abroadouldn't because of the influence of cCorona⤵︎. So I want to connect with many people through this diaryjournal！Today I studied with friends at Starbucks.
I will write my diarya journal tomorrow, so please comment and correct diarythe grammar！
"A journal" implies that you are not talking about this current journal.
"Correct diary grammar" is unnatural here. You don't need "diary" here. "Grammar" will need an article, and the correct one to use it "the" for this sentence.
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LangCorrectへようこそ！たくさん書いてください。
June 20, 2020
Thank you Jasmine！ I knew for the first time the difference between diary and journal. Do my best to improve my English little by little！
I will write a diary starting from today！
OI will output the words I have learned in a diary to improve my English in a diary.
I will write my diary tomorrow, so please comment and correct diarythe grammar！ of my diaries!
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I corrected the wording a little. This is a very nice introduction! Very readable, almost no errors. I'm looking forward to your diary entries.
June 20, 2020
Thank you so much！ Do my best to improve my English little by little！
I will write a diary starting from today！
I'm going to write a diary starting from today.
OutputI will use the words I have learned to improve my English in a diary.
If there is something wrong with the grammar, please point it out.
I would like to introduce myself a little.
I am a college student and I live in Osaka.
Originally I was planning to go to study abroad in Australia from March of this year in March, but I can't study abroad because of the influence of cCorona⤵︎ So I want to connect with many people through this diary！Today I studied with friends at Starbucks.
I will write my diary tomorrow, so please comment and correct diarmy grammar in my diary！
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I will write a diary from today！ I will write a diary starting from today！ I will write a diary starting from today！ I will write a "Diary" sounds more personal. It's usually something you don't share with others. "Journal" doesn't have that feeling. |
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I'm going to write a diary from today. I'm going to write a diary starting from today. I'm going to write a "Starting" means you are in the process of beginning something. It is more natural to say "starting today" than "from today" in this sentence. Other ways to say this: "Starting today, I am going to write a journal." "From this point on, I'm going to write a journal." "I'm going to write a journal from this point on." |
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Output the words I have learned to improve my English in a diary.
"Output" means you are making a certain amount of something. "I will (verb)" means you are going to do something in the future. |
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If there is something wrong with the grammar, please point it out. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I would like to introduce myself a little. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am a college student and live in Osaka. I am a college student and I live in Osaka. I am a college student and I live in Osaka. You can also say: "I am a college student who lives in Osaka." |
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Originally I was planning to go to study abroad in Australia from March of this year, but I can't study abroad because of the influence of corona⤵︎ So I want to connect with many people through this diary！Today I studied with friends at Starbucks. Originally I was planning to Originally I was planning to |
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I will write my diary tomorrow, so please comment and correct diary grammar！ I will write my diary tomorrow, so please comment and correct I will write my diary tomorrow, so please comment and correct I will write "A journal" implies that you are not talking about this current journal. "Correct diary grammar" is unnatural here. You don't need "diary" here. "Grammar" will need an article, and the correct one to use it "the" for this sentence. |
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