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sachisachi

Jan. 8, 2024

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I Went to Australia (13)

I went to Australia last month with my friends.

It was a very busy trip because we only had 7 days there.

We went to lots of places and met many people.

We had so much fun, but we had too much events, so I don't remember everything clearly.

For example, we met many people every day in a party or shops and we talked, but I don't remember all their name.

I have to visit Australia again.


先月友達とオーストラリアに行きました。

たった7日間だったのでとても忙しい旅でした。

いろんなところに行ってたくさんの人に出会いました。

とても楽しかったのですが、たくさんの出来事があって、全部はっきり覚えていません。

例えば、パーティーやお店でたくさんの人に会って話しましたが彼らの名前を全部覚えていません。

もう一回行かなくちゃ。

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It was a very busy trip because we only hadspent 7 days there.

We went to a lots of places and met many people.

We had so much fun, but we had too muchthere were to many events, so I don't remember everything clearly.

For example, we met many people every day in a party or shops and we talked, but I don't remember all their names.

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sachisachi

Jan. 11, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction!

I Went tovisited Australia.

It was a very bn adventurousy trip because we only had 7 days there.

The word "adventurous" makes it sound more positive.

We went to lots ofnumerous places and met many people.

We had so much fun, buthowever, we had too much events, sgoing on. So I don't remember everything clearly.

For example, we met many people every day indifferent people at a party or the shops and we talkedeach day, but I don't remember all their names.

I have to visit Australia again.

You can also say "I want to visit Australia again."

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Well done! I hope you loved Australia.
Australia is my home country although I am not living there at the moment.

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sachisachi

Jan. 8, 2024

1

Thank you so much for your correction. I love Australia, but I don't really know about Australia yet. However, people are nice, food is great, and there are lots of beautiful places. I want to visit Australia again!

I Went to Australia

I went to Australia last month with my friends.

It was a very busy trip because we only had 7 days there.

We went to lots of places and met many people.

We had so much fun, but we had too muchany events, so I don't remember everything clearly.

For example, we met and talked to many people every day in at party or shops and we talkedies or in shops, but I don't remember all their names.

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Wow! 7 days is a tight trip, but sounds like it was a lot of fun!

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sachisachi

Jan. 8, 2024

1

Thank you so much for your correction!

I Wwent to Australia

I went to Australia last month with my friends.

It was a very busy trip because we only had 7 days there.

We went to lots of places and met many people.

We had so much fun, but we had toso muchany events, so I don't remember everything clearly.

I havwould like to visit Australia again.

We had so much fun, but we had too muchany events, so I don't remember everything clearly.

For example, we met many people every day in at partyies or shops, and we talked, but I don't remember all of their names.

Feedback

Brilliant spelling! Keep up the good work. :)

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sachisachi

Jan. 8, 2024

1

Thank you so much for your correction!

I went to Australia last month with my friends.


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It was a very busy trip because we only had 7 days there.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was a very bn adventurousy trip because we only had 7 days there.

The word "adventurous" makes it sound more positive.

It was a very busy trip because we only hadspent 7 days there.

We went to lots of places and met many people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We went to lots ofnumerous places and met many people.

We went to a lots of places and met many people.

We had so much fun, but we had too much events, so I don't remember everything clearly.


We had so much fun, but we had too muchany events, so I don't remember everything clearly.

We had so much fun, but we had toso muchany events, so I don't remember everything clearly.

We had so much fun, but we had too muchany events, so I don't remember everything clearly.

We had so much fun, buthowever, we had too much events, sgoing on. So I don't remember everything clearly.

We had so much fun, but we had too muchthere were to many events, so I don't remember everything clearly.

For example, we met many people every day in a party or shops and we talked, but I don't remember all their name.


For example, we met many people every day in at partyies or shops, and we talked, but I don't remember all of their names.

For example, we met and talked to many people every day in at party or shops and we talkedies or in shops, but I don't remember all their names.

For example, we met many people every day indifferent people at a party or the shops and we talkedeach day, but I don't remember all their names.

For example, we met many people every day in a party or shops and we talked, but I don't remember all their names.

I have to visit Australia again.


I havwould like to visit Australia again.

I have to visit Australia again.

You can also say "I want to visit Australia again."

I Went to Australia


I Wwent to Australia

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I Went tovisited Australia.

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