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I Watched A Movie

I watched a horror movie on the weekend.

I almost fall a sleep during watching it.

"asleep" is one word, not a combination of the article "a" and the word "sleep"

My grirlfriend keepedpt my focus on it.

We both agreed it with her,

"We agreed it with her" is unnatural, since "her" is part of the "we" in this discussion while the sentence implies she's an outsider.

The ticket and the popcorn costed a lot.

I think doesenit isn't worth it to go movie i rather toto the cinema rather than watch on a streaming platform.

The streaming platform's monthly prizece is cheaper than a movie ticket.

I watched a horror movie on the weekend.

Be sure to include a determiner

I almost faell a sleep during watching it.

- "Asleep" is one word
- You're writing in past tense, so it should be "fell", not "fall"

My grirlfriend keepedpt mye focused on it.

- Minor spelling mistake for girlfriend
- "Keeped" isn't a word, the past tense for keep is kept
- "Kept my focus on it" works, but "kept me focused on it" sounds more natural

The ticket and the popcorn costed a lot.

- The past tense of cost is also cost, not costed
- There should be an "a" in front of lot

I think doesenit isn't worth it to go the movie i. I'd rather towatch it on a streaming platform.

- Should be split into two sentences
- You didn't include what you'd rather do

The streaming platform monthly prizece is cheaper than a movie ticket.

- Spelling mistake for "price"
- Include "is", because otherwise it is not a complete sentence.

I watched a horror movie on thethis weekend.

I don't know if Hungarian has the part of grammar called an "indefinite article," but in English there are two "articles" - definite and indefinite.

The definite article is used to indicate a specific object. In English, the definite article is the word "the." Thus, if I owned a car and I wanted to say that I drove it, I would say, "I drove the car." (Of course, I could also say, "I drove my car," but I'm explaining articles, nor possessives.)

However, if I wanted to say that I drove some other car, without specifying which car it was, I would say, "I drove a car." If the word for the object about which I'm talking begins with a vowel sound, then the indefinite article is "an." Thus, I could say, "I ate an apple."

In your case, you didn't mention the title of the movie, so you need the indefinite article and, since what you watched ("horror movie") began with a consonant, the correct indefinite article to use is "a."

In addition, although there are times where one could say "on the weekend," it's relatively uncommon. In your case, "this weekend" would sound more natural.

I almost faell a sleep duringwhile watching it.

"Fall" is the present tense. "Fell" is the past tense, and should be used here, since you already watched the movie.

The condition of sleeping is called being "asleep." You are not pointing to something and saying, "That is a sleep," the way you would say, "That is a dog." Instead, you are talking about the action of "falling" into the condition of sleeping.

The word "during" is used when specifying an even or time period, but not usually when talking about an action. Thus, "I almost fell asleep during the movie," would be correct, but when talking about "watching it," you should say, "I almost fell asleep while watching it."

My grirlfriend keepedpt my focus on it.

"Grilfriend" is an obvious typing error of just switching the "r" and "i."

The proper past tense for "keep" is "kept." It's one of those irregular forms that English has. Some words even have both regular AND irregular forms,sometimes determined by regular usage or maybe older usage, such as "dreamed" or "dreamt."

WeI agreed it with her.

Since the rest of your story doesn't mention any other people - only you and your girlfriend, there don't seem to be any other people for "we" to agree with her - just yourself, so this should be "I agreed."

The "it" just should not be there - especially since the next part of what you wrote explains the thing about which you agreed.

I don't know why the system split this at this point, but maybe you typed it as two different sentences. If so, this one needs a period at the end.

iIt was terrible.

If this was supposed to be a separate sentence from the previous one, then "it" should be capitalized.

One other note: another, less "choppy" way to write this would be to make it a single sentence, such as "I agreed with her: it was terrible." The colon (":"), when used this way, indicates an explanation, reason or example. In other words, why did I agree with her? Because it was terrible.

The ticket and the popcorn costed a lot.

This is another irregular past tense in English. The present tense is "cost," but when you are talking about how much you actually paid for something, the past tense is the same word: "cost." On the other hand, the word "cost" can sometimes mean "estimating or determining the cost of something. In those cases, "costed" is the past tense. Thus, one could say, "The developers costed the project and presented their findings to their manager."

Also, when talking about a high amount or a large quantity, the correct expression is "a lot," instead of just "lot."

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There are several things here. First, there is no such word "doesent," but I can see where you got that, since that is how "doesn't" is pronounced. Even so, "doesn't" is not the right word choice here.

There are two main ways to say what you wanted to say. I have put both of them into the correction box so you can see them. I would use the first one, but both are acceptable.

The word "rather" is usually expressing volition, will or preference, so it should be "I would rather," which is usually shortened to "I'd rather."

Since this is really a separate sentence, there should be a period after "movie" and the "I" should be capitalized. Of course, in English, the word "I" to refer to oneself is always capitalized, anyway, but this is also definitely the start of a new sentence.

You may "go to" a movie, when it's in a theater, but you "use" a streaming platform, instead of going to it.

The streaming platform's monthly prizece is cheaper than a movie ticket.

A "prize" is something that someone gets for winning a contest. Instead, a "price" is what you pay for something.

For the way you have written it, you are talking about the monthly price that "belongs to" the streaming platform, so you should use the possessive form "platform's." Another way to write this (without the possessive form) would be "The monthly price of the streaming platform."

Also, you forgot the "is" after "price."

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The ticket and the popcorn costed a lot.

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