June 7, 2023
When I was a child. I used to read about comic of Japan and spend a lot of time to read them. When I was a student university. Besides English, I also want to learn other languages. I choosed Japanese. When I free time, I usually watch about everything of Japan. From that, I started like Japan. I have been learning Japanese since 2016. But, I don't speak Japanese very well. I'm working for Japan company. My major is architect and I really like my job. Japan has four seasons: Spring, Fall, Summer and Winter. For me, My favorite season are Spring and Winter. Because, In the Winter I can see snow and nice nuture in the Spring. I hope I will visit Japan in the future.
I WANT TO VISIT JAPAN IN THE FUTURE
When I was a child.,
When I was a child,
I used to read about comic of JapanJapanese comics and spend a lot of time to read them.
I used to read Japanese comics and spend a lot of time to read them.
If it's a comic from Japan, it would be 'Japanese comics'. If the comic is about Japan, you can say 'comics about Japan'.
When I was a student university. student,
When I was a university student,
Besides English, I alsoI wanted to learn other languages besides English.
I wanted to learn other languages besides English.
I choosed Japanese.
I chose Japanese.
When I had free time, I usually watch about everything ofed things about Japan.
When I had free time, I usually watched things about Japan.
'watched' if this was in the past
From that, I started to like Japan. From that, I started to like Japan.
I'm working for a Japanese company. I'm working for a Japanese company.
My major is architecture and I really like my job. My major is architecture and I really like my job.
For me, My favorite seasons are Spring and Winter. For me, My favorite seasons are Spring and Winter.
Because, Iin the Winter, I can see snow and nice nuature in the Spring.
Because, in the Winter, I can see snow and nice nature in the Spring.
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When I was a child.,
When I was a child,
I used to read about comic of JapanJapanese comics and spendt a lot of time to reading them.
I used to read about Japanese comics and spent a lot of time reading them.
When I was a student university. student,
When I was a university student,
Besides English, I also wanted to learn other languages besides English.
I also wanted to learn other languages besides English.
I choosed Japanese.
I chose Japanese.
When I have free time, I usually watch about everything ofthings about Japan.(?)
When I have free time, I usually watch things about Japan(?)
FromBecause of that, I started to like Japan.
Because of that, I started to like Japan.
But, I don't speak Japanese very well.
But I don't speak Japanese very well.
I'm working for a Japanese company. I'm working for a Japanese company.
My major iwas architecture and I really like my job.
My major was architecture and I really like my job.
For me, Mmy favorite seasons are Spring and Winter.,
For me, my favorite seasons are Spring and Winter,
Bbecause, I in the Winter I can see snow and nice nuature in the Spring.
because in the Winter I can see snow and nature in the Spring.
I WANT TO VISIT JAPAN IN THE FUTURE
When I was a child, I used to read about Japan comics and spend a lot of time reading them. When I was a child, I used to read about Japan comics and spend a lot of time reading them.
A sentence should have subject and a verb. "When I was a child" can't be a complete sentence.
I used to read about comic of Japan and spend a lot of time to read them.
I combined both sentences to create a complete sentence.
When I was a student at university, I also wanted to learn other languages besides English. When I was a student at university, I also wanted to learn other languages besides English.
A sentence should have subject and a verb. "When I was a student university" can't be a complete sentence.
Besides English, I also want to learn other languages.
I also choosed to learn Japanese.
I also chose to learn Japanese.
When IIn my free time, I usually watch about everything of Japan lot of Japanese related things.
In my free time, I usually watch a lot of Japanese related things.
FromDue to thatis, I started to like Japan.
Due to this, I started to like Japan.
I have been learning Japanese since 2016.
But, I don't speak Japanese very well.
I'm working for a Japanese company. I'm working for a Japanese company.
My major isI am an architect and I really like my job.
I am an architect and I really like my job.
Japan has four seasons: Spring, Fall, Summer and Winter.
For me, Mmy favorite seasons are Spring and Winter.
For me, my favorite seasons are Spring and Winter.
Because, In the Winter, I can see snow and nice nuture in the Spring, I can see nice nature.
In the Winter, I can see snow and in the Spring, I can see nice nature.
I hope I will visit Japan in the future.
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When I was a child. When I was a child, I used to read about Japan comics and spend a lot of time reading them. When I was a child, I used to read about Japan comics and spend a lot of time reading them. A sentence should have subject and a verb. "When I was a child" can't be a complete sentence.
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I used to read about comic of Japan and spend a lot of time to read them.
I combined both sentences to create a complete sentence.
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I used to read If it's a comic from Japan, it would be 'Japanese comics'. If the comic is about Japan, you can say 'comics about Japan'. |
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When I was a student university. When I was a student at university, I also wanted to learn other languages besides English. When I was a student at university, I also wanted to learn other languages besides English. A sentence should have subject and a verb. "When I was a student university" can't be a complete sentence.
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When I free time, I usually watch about everything of Japan.
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From that, I started like Japan.
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I'm working for Japan company. I'm working for a Japanese company. I'm working for a Japanese company. I'm working for a Japanese company. I'm working for a Japanese company. I'm working for a Japanese company. I'm working for a Japanese company. |
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My major is architect and I really like my job. My major is architecture and I really like my job. My major is architecture and I really like my job.
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Japan has four seasons: Spring, Fall, Summer and Winter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For me, My favorite season are Spring and Winter.
For me, For me, My favorite seasons are Spring and Winter. For me, My favorite seasons are Spring and Winter.
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