June 12, 2023
I want to talk about my laptop :)
Every day, I use my laptop to study and relax. About studying, I'm trying to learn by myself and then use the laptop to search for the answer. Sometimes, I want to prepare for my subjects tomorrow and discuss with friends to do the group exercises. When the Covid-19 pandemic comes, I have studied online through my laptop. Imagine that you just sit and look at the screen all morning, you will feel tired and asleep like me at that time. Besides, I use my laptop for my hobby when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I like to play on my smartphone :) ). I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes so I use my laptop for about 3 hours a day. In conclusion, I think using a laptop brings me lots of benefits if I use it in the right way.
Every day, I use my laptop to study and relax.
AboutTo studying, I'm trying to learn by myself and then use the/my laptop to search for the answer.
Sometimes, I want to prepare for my subjects for tomorrow and (then) discuss with friends to do the group exercises with my friends.
It's either you discuss the group exercises with your friends or you do the group exercises
When the Covid-19 pandemic comes, I havestarted / During the Covid-19 pandemic, I studied online through my laptop.
Imagine that you are just sitting (there) and looking at the screen all morning, you will feel tired and asleepy like me at that time.
Besides that, I use my laptop for my hobbyies when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I also like to play on my smartphone :) ).
If you mean "in addition to that" or "furthermore," then you can say "besides that."
"Besides" is usually used when you're adding an additional fact to a related statement. Ex: She doesn't like swimming. Besides, she doesn't have a swimsuit.
I know that using devices like computers, TVs, and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes, so I use my laptop for about 3 hours a day.
In conclusion, I think using a laptop brings me lots of benefits if I use it (in) the right way.
June 13, 2023
Thanks for your corrections! :))
I want to talk about my laptop :)
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Sometimes, I want to'll prepare for my subjects tomorrow, and then discuss with friends to do thewhen we do group exercises.
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Besides, II also use my laptop for my other hobbyies when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I like to play on my smartphone too :) ).
I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes so I. So I try to use my laptop for about 3 hours a day.
In conclusion, I think using a laptop brings me lots of benefits if I use it in the right way.
June 13, 2023
Thanks for your corrections! :D
I want to talk about my laptop :)
Every day, I use my laptop every day to study and relax.
AboutWhen studying, I'm trying to learn by myself and then use the laptop to search for the answers.
simple present as this is a habit.
Sometimes, I want to prepare for mytomorrow's subjects tomorrow and discuss with friends to do the group exercises with friends .
When the Covid-19 pandemic coames, I have I studied online through my laptop.
Simple past tense here. Completed action in past.
Imagine that you just sit and look at the screen all morning,; you willould feel tired and asleepy like meI did at that time.
BesidesIn addition, I use my laptop for my hobby when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I like to play on my smartphone :) ).
I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time willcould harm my eyes so I only use my laptop for about 3 hours a day.
"could" as possibility.
In conclusion, I think using a laptop brings me lots of benefits if I use it in the right way.
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June 13, 2023
Thanks for your corrections! :D
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Every day, I use my laptop to study and relax.
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About studying, I'm trying to learn by myself and then use the laptop to search for the answer.
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Sometimes, I want to prepare for my subjects tomorrow and discuss with friends to do the group exercises. Sometimes Sometimes, I Sometimes, I want to prepare for my subjects for tomorrow and (then) discuss It's either you discuss the group exercises with your friends or you do the group exercises |
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When the Covid-19 pandemic comes, I have studied online through my laptop. When the Covid-19 pandemic c Simple past tense here. Completed action in past. When the Covid-19 pandemic When the Covid-19 pandemic |
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Imagine that you just sit and look at the screen all morning, you will feel tired and asleep like me at that time. Imagine that you just sit and look at the screen all morning
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Besides, I use my laptop for my hobby when I have free time: listening to music on Youtube, Spotify,..; watching films; reading E-books and playing games ( by the way I like to play on my smartphone :) ).
Besides that, I use my laptop for my hobb If you mean "in addition to that" or "furthermore," then you can say "besides that." "Besides" is usually used when you're adding an additional fact to a related statement. Ex: She doesn't like swimming. Besides, she doesn't have a swimsuit. |
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I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes so I use my laptop for about 3 hours a day. I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time "could" as possibility. I know that using devices like computers, TVs and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes I know that using devices like computers, TVs, and smartphones for a long time will harm my eyes, so I use my laptop for about 3 hours a day. |
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