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viacoo

Dec. 1, 2025

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Retire or NOT at next year

I live in Shanghai China,I am 48 yeas old. I have been working 25 years without any gap, the job is so boring for me.
In the past decades, for saving money, i have been always working hard and controlling bill, so i have enough money for my FIRE life in the future.
Even now, i still hesitate to retiring or not. Maybe study English, practice writing , understanding different culture is helpful for me.

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RTo retire or NOT at next year

I live in Shanghai China, and I am 48 years old.

I have been working 25 years without any gap, the and my job is so boring forto me.

In the past decades, forFor decades, in order to savinge money, iI have been always working hard and controlling bill,my expenses so iI have enough money for my FIRE life in the future.

Even now, i still hesitate to retiring or notwhether or not to retire.

Maybe I will study English, and practice writing ,because understanding different culture iss are helpful for me.

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Good job! Don't forget your ands and because to connect phrases.

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viacoo

Dec. 4, 2025

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Thanks a lot!

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I have been working 25 years without any gap, the job is so boring for me.

In the past decades, for saving money, iI have been always working hard and controlling bill, so is to save some money , so I would have enough money for my FIRE life in the future.

I am sorry i forgot to add an s in the end of the word "bills"

Even now, iI still hesitate to retiringe or not.

Maybe studying English, practiceing writing ,and understanding different a culture is helpful for me.

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You only live once , just make sure to have a clear goal , enough money and a strong heart , then you can travel to England to work " you could help people learning chinese , or you can maybe come just to have vacation and enjoy the culture you have been learning about . sometimes all we need is a break , Stay healthy ( your writing is good by the way ) .

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viacoo

Dec. 2, 2025

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Thanks for your kindly suggestion, It will encourage me .

I want to retire at next year

I live in Shanghai China,I am 48 yeas old.

I live in Shanghai China, and I am 48 years old.

I have been working 25 years without any gap, the job is so boring for me.

I have been working 25 years without any gap, the job is so boring for me.

I have been working 25 years without any gap, the and my job is so boring forto me.

In the past decades, for saving money, i have been always working hard and controlling bill, so i have enough money for my FIRE life in the future.

In the past decades, for saving money, iI have been always working hard and controlling bill, so is to save some money , so I would have enough money for my FIRE life in the future.

I am sorry i forgot to add an s in the end of the word "bills"

In the past decades, forFor decades, in order to savinge money, iI have been always working hard and controlling bill,my expenses so iI have enough money for my FIRE life in the future.

Even now, i still hesitate to retiring or not.

Even now, iI still hesitate to retiringe or not.

Even now, i still hesitate to retiring or notwhether or not to retire.

Maybe study English, practice writing , understanding different culture is helpful for me.

Maybe studying English, practiceing writing ,and understanding different a culture is helpful for me.

Maybe I will study English, and practice writing ,because understanding different culture iss are helpful for me.

Retire or NOT at next year

RTo retire or NOT at next year

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