Feb. 19, 2022
I want to make friends with everyone
Hello I come from Beijing，China.I am 14 and I am a student in grade 9.I want make friends to improve my Communication skills.I can also introduce my country and Let you know the excellent traditional Chinese culture.Chinese culture is broad and profound with 5000 years history,If you like, I can tell you. It's my honor.
I want to make friends with everyone
Hello. I come from Beijing，, China. I am 14, and I am a student in grade 9. I want make friends to improve my Ccommunication skills. I can also introduce my country and Lethelp you get to know the excellent traditional Chinese culture. Chinese culture is broad and profound, with 5000 years history,. If you like, I can tell you all about it.
It's would be my honor.
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Nice writing! 加油，希望你在这个网站交很多朋友们。
Feb. 20, 2022
Thank you for your encouragement.😄 My language is not very fluent. I will try my best
I want to make friends with everyone
Hello I comeam from Beijing，, China. I am 14 and I am a student inyears old and in the 9th grade 9. I want to make friends to improve my Ccommunication skills. I can also introduce you to my country and Lettell you knowabout the excellent, traditional Chinese culture. Chinese culture is broad and quite profound with a 5000 years history,. If you like, I can tell you.
It's my honor.
Feb. 20, 2022
Thank you very much for your correction. I will try my best to speak normal English. I will pay attention to these words.😊
I want to make friends with everyone
Hello, I come from Beijing，, China. I am 14 and I am a student in grade 9. I want make friends to improve my Ccommunication skills. I can also introduce you to my country and Letshow you know the excellent traditional Chinese culture.Chinese culture It is broad and profound with 5000 years of history, If you like, I can tellshow it to you.
Repeating "I am" isn't necessary but still correct. It is better to use "show" instead of "let" if you are talking about introducing something to someone. Instead of repeating "Chinese culture" you can use "it"
It's my honor.
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A really good piece of writing! :)
Feb. 20, 2022
Thank you for your correction. I will study English hard and pay attention to these details!😄
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Hello I come from Beijing，China.I am 14 and I am a student in grade 9.I want make friends to improve my Communication skills.I can also introduce my country and Let you know the excellent traditional Chinese culture.Chinese culture is broad and profound with 5000 years history,If you like, I can tell you. Hello, I come from Beijing Repeating "I am" isn't necessary but still correct. It is better to use "show" instead of "let" if you are talking about introducing something to someone. Instead of repeating "Chinese culture" you can use "it" Hello I Hello. I come from Beijing |
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