Jan. 16, 2021
I want to keep a cat
I love cats. They are always around my side, and scratch my feet gently. But my mother disagreed with me that I could keep a cat. she said " keeping a cat needs a lot of patience which you don't have. what's more, you're using my money to keep a cat." well. I think she is right. I will definitely keep a cat once I worked.
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I love cats.
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Feedback
Great job! Especially the gerund with "having a cat takes a lot of patience"--not always the easiest grammar structure! Generally, you "have a pet" if you're talking about a long time, and you "get a pet" if you're talking about the start of having a pet.
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