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Don't worry too much about commas, you will only really need them if you are writing formally and the rules for them can be a bit confusing. Currently the weather where I am is cloudy and cold, but I like it. Good luck with writing!

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"deeply" works in this situation, but it is a little different to what is usually chosen. As well, "hhhh" may confuse some people but is not incorrect.

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1. "I try" vs. "I'm trying" – The Key Difference
"I try" → Suggests a general habit or something you regularly do.
Example: "I try to read a book every month." (A regular effort, even if you don’t always succeed.)
"I'm trying" → Suggests an active, ongoing effort or a first attempt at something that you’re still working on.
Example: "I'm trying to cook more at home." (You're actively making an effort, but it’s not a habit yet.)

2. "Diaries" means whole books, but you mean individual writings.
Fix: Use "diary entries" instead.

3. "To share with you" sounds smoother and more natural because it links the actions with purpose.

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"May" is a verb (used for possibility or permission)
* "It may rain" you can also say "It's a possibility it will rain today"
* "Yes you may use my pencil" you can also say "You you have permission to use my pencil"

"Maybe" is an adverb (means "perhaps" or "possibly")
"Maybe you prefer water?" you can also say "Perhaps you prefer water?"
"Maybe it will rain today" you can also say "Possibly it will rain today"

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We wouldn't use "deeply" here. "thoroughly" would sometimes be used, but it sounds a little too strong for the way you've written the sentence.

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I changed the order of some of the words so it would sound better. Also, in English, we need spaces in between the punctuation marks.

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Your English is great keep up the good practice!

wWhat is the weather like twhere you live? It is rainy here so now I have to dry my clothes with a hair dryer at school. Hello I'm a middle school student in China. I am interested in English so I will try to write more articles and diaries and share them with you.

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wWhat is the weather like twhere you live? It is rainy here so now I have to dry my clothes with a hair dryer at school. Hello, I'm a middle school student in China. I am interested in English so I try to write more articles and diaries and share them with you.

when starting a sentence, make sure to write the first letter in capital letters. I changed there to where for a more clear message. Put space after punctuation marks.

"It is rainy here so I have to dry my clothes with a hair dryer at school" I removed "now" because you already have "here"

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Should I is a more proper way to ask someone. Also, you should capitalize the first letter in the proper noun.

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"deeply" sounds strange in this context. I changed it to quickly, but it could also be changed to something like: "I want to significantly improve my English."