Sept. 8, 2024
I Want to Drink a Coke Float.
I had two things that I decided to do today, but I ended up doing nothing. 🫠
I didn't have any plans and watched YouTube videos that I was really into when I was young.
I planned to make a coke float, but I opened the freezer there was a butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream. I thought it was vanilla... What a day! 🫠
コーラフロートが飲みたい
今日はやろうと決めたことが２つあったけど、結局やらなかった🫠
特に予定がなくて、若い時にはまっていたYouTubeの動画を観た。
コーラフロートを作ろうと思っていたのに冷凍庫を開けたらバタークッキー&クリームチーズ味のアイスクリームがあった。バニラだと思っていた…。なんて日だ！🫠
I had two things that I decided to do today, but I ended up doing nothing.
I planned to make a coke float, but when I opened the freezer there was a butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream.
Sept. 16, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
I had two things that I decidwanted to do today, but I ended up doing nothing.
Your original sentence is perfect but using "wanted" is what a native would say.
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I didn't have any plans and watched YouTube videos that I was really into when I was young.
This also reads perfect. But I wonder if you wanted to communicate that you watched a YouTuber (a person), or a YouTube channel that you liked when you were younger. The current sentence suggests you were watching the *same* videos that you watched in the past.
Alternatives:
"I didn't have any plans and watched some videos on a YouTube channel that I was really into when I was young"
"I didn't have any plans and watched some videos by a YouTuber that I was really into when I was younger"
I had planned to make a cCoke float, but I opened the freezer and there was aonly butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream.
I thought it wasI had vanilla... What a day!
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Very well done!
Sept. 16, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and feedback!
I Want to Drink a Coke Float.
I had two things that I decided to do today, but I ended up doing nothing.
🫠 I didn't have any plans and watched YouTube videos that I was really into when I was young.
I planned to make a coke float, but when I opened the freezer, there was a butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream.
I thought it was vanilla... What a day!
🫠
Sept. 16, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
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I had two things that I decided to do today, but I ended up doing nothing. I had two things that I Your original sentence is perfect but using "wanted" is what a native would say. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I had two things |
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🫠 I didn't have any plans and watched YouTube videos that I was really into when I was young. 🫠 This also reads perfect. But I wonder if you wanted to communicate that you watched a YouTuber (a person), or a YouTube channel that you liked when you were younger. The current sentence suggests you were watching the *same* videos that you watched in the past. Alternatives: "I didn't have any plans and watched some videos on a YouTube channel that I was really into when I was young" "I didn't have any plans and watched some videos by a YouTuber that I was really into when I was younger" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I planned to make a coke float, but I opened the freezer there was a butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream. I had planned to make a I planned to make a coke float, but when I opened the freezer, there was a butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream. I planned to make a coke float, but when I opened the freezer there was |
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