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kikims

Sept. 24, 2021

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I wanna take an exam.

Today I am studying English all day long as usual.
I would like to get the Universal Control on iMac.
I want to go to a caffee shop too.
After the take a dose I’ll go to the center city.
I wanna go outside not only to go a coffee but also to take the English exam.
I’m not sure how is my English level and to get score level.
However, though I might get a low score, I have a strong desire to take an exam.
Because it is like a dot of my life.
I feel, like that I can draw a new line from this dot.

Corrections

I wannat to take an exam.

I wanna -> conversation / messaging friends.

(I think for a journal it's better to be a little more formal. But, this is up to you.)

Today, I am studying English all day long, as usual.

I would like to get the Universal Control on iMac.

I want to go to a caoffee shop too.

After the take a dose I’ll go to the city center city.

I don't understand this?

After having a drink, I'll go to the city center(?)
I don't know what you mean by "take a dose."

I wannat to go outside, not only to go afor a drink of coffee but also to take the English exam.

the - specific English exam.
An English exam - any exam. Nothing particular.

I’m not sure how iswhat my English level and to get score level.is like, so I'm not sure what score I can get.

I'm not sure if this is what you want to say. I hope it is!

However,Even though I might get a low score, I have a strong desire to take an/the exam.

an - general
the - specific exam.

If you have an exam you want to take eg, EIKEN. Then please use "the exam". Be consistent, if you use the in the other sentence, use it here too.

Because it is like a dot of my life.

I understand what you mean, but I'm not sure how best to word it in English.
Maybe another native can help! sorry haha

I feel, like that I can draw a new line from this dot.

I wanna take an exam.


I wannat to take an exam.

I wanna -> conversation / messaging friends. (I think for a journal it's better to be a little more formal. But, this is up to you.)

Today I am studying English all day long as usual.


Today, I am studying English all day long, as usual.

I would like to get the Universal Control on iMac.


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I want to go to a caffee shop too.


I want to go to a caoffee shop too.

After the take a dose I’ll go to the center city.


After the take a dose I’ll go to the city center city.

I don't understand this? After having a drink, I'll go to the city center(?) I don't know what you mean by "take a dose."

I wanna go outside not only to go a coffee but also to take the English exam.


I wannat to go outside, not only to go afor a drink of coffee but also to take the English exam.

the - specific English exam. An English exam - any exam. Nothing particular.

I’m not sure how is my English level and to get score level.


I’m not sure how iswhat my English level and to get score level.is like, so I'm not sure what score I can get.

I'm not sure if this is what you want to say. I hope it is!

However, though I might get a low score, I have a strong desire to take an exam.


However,Even though I might get a low score, I have a strong desire to take an/the exam.

an - general the - specific exam. If you have an exam you want to take eg, EIKEN. Then please use "the exam". Be consistent, if you use the in the other sentence, use it here too.

Because it is like a dot of my life.


Because it is like a dot of my life.

I understand what you mean, but I'm not sure how best to word it in English. Maybe another native can help! sorry haha

I feel, like that I can draw a new line from this dot.


I feel, like that I can draw a new line from this dot.

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