Oct. 28, 2023
I wanna describe my desk
Hi, everyone. Today I want to describe my desk. My desk is big. On the desk I have two monitors and beautiful keyboard. On my desk you can see some pencils and notebooks. I have four or five notebooks. Some of them I use for studies, some of them I use for describing my own thoughts. Also on my desk I have a lamp. That's all!)
I wannat to describe my desk
'wanna' is usually only used when speaking. When writing, it is better to use 'want to'
Hi, everyone.
Today I want to describe my desk.
My desk is big.
On the desk I have two monitors and a beautiful keyboard.
On my desk you can see some pencils and notebooks.
I have four or five notebooks.
Some of them I use for my studies, some of them I use for describing my own thoughts.
it makes more sense here to either say 'for my studies' or 'for studying'
Also on my desk I have a lamp.
That's all!)
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it is very easy to understand what you mean, you're clearly amazing at this language :)
I wannat to describe my desk
On the desk, I have two monitors and beautiful keyboard.
On my desk, you can see some pencils and some notebooks.
Optional, but it flows better with the article before both nouns.
That's all!)
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Good. You can use commas to improve the flow.
I wannat to describe my desk
That's all!)
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Very good. Just one small typo. Good job.
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I wanna describe my desk I wan I wan I wan 'wanna' is usually only used when speaking. When writing, it is better to use 'want to' |
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Hi, everyone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I want to describe my desk. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My desk is big. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the desk I have two monitors and beautiful keyboard. On the desk I have two monitors and a beautiful keyboard. On the desk, I have two monitors and beautiful keyboard. On the desk I have two monitors and a beautiful keyboard. |
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On my desk you can see some pencils and notebooks. On my desk, you can see some pencils and some notebooks. Optional, but it flows better with the article before both nouns. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have four or five notebooks. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some of them I use for studies, some of them I use for describing my own thoughts.
What you wrote makes sense but this is more natural, leading with the pronoun Some of them I use for my studies, some of them I use for describing my own thoughts. it makes more sense here to either say 'for my studies' or 'for studying' |
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Also on my desk I have a lamp. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's all!) That's all! That's all! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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