July 8, 2025
I Used to Hate Learning. Now I Can't Stop.
I used to hate learning when I was younger. It seemed worthless, felt like a burden. It was something I had to do for absolutely nothing. My grades were bad, and I think my teachers believed I would become another homeless man in the town. Over time, something changed. I started to feel that I can be more than who I am. I decided to change my life and get into a university. In recent years I learn every day, because I want to. I feel like learning is one of the best things I can do, because it's the only thing that no one can take away from me. Sometimes, what we hate is just something we haven’t understood yet.
I Used to Hate Learning. Now I Can't Stop.
I used toWhen I was younger, I hated learning when I was younger.
The older one was correct, but this is more natural.
It seemed worthless, felt like a burden.
It was something I had to do for absolutely nothing in return.
My grades were bad, and I think my teachers believed I would become just another homeless man in the town.
The "just" adds a level of insignificance to your existence, which is what one might strive for in this sentence.
Over time, something changed.
I started to feel that I can be more than who I amhad been.
I decided to change my life and get into a university.
In recent years I've learned every day, because I want to.
I feel like learning is one of the best things I can do, because it's the only thing that no one can take away from me.
Sometimes, what we hate is just something we haven’t understood yet.
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I'm glad you defeated the evil of ignorance! I tried to grade this one harsher because of your earlier comment about how some people found more mistakes, so most of these corrections were just about syntax, which I guess is what you should study now, considering you have nearly perfect grammar.
July 8, 2025
Thank you. I'll try. Nearly perfect grammar... I wish it were really like that. I know how to use the basic tenses, but I still struggle with perfect tenses and other complex things. This is why I don't use them. :D
It seemed worthless, (it / and) felt like a burden.
I think it's a bit more natural to include another word with this pause.
I decided to change my life and get into a university.
"university" / "school" / "work" are sort of unusual words as they're also used as a sort of abstract place. And when you're not talking about a specific university, it's more natural to use them in the abstract place sense.
July 8, 2025
Thank you!
I Used to Hate Learning. Now I Can't Stop.
I used to hate learning when I was younger.
It seemed worthless, felt like a burden.
It was something I had to do for absolutely nothing.
My grades were bad, and I think my teachers believed I would become another homeless man in (the) town.
"The" is optional here
Over time, something changed.
I started to feel that I canould be more than who I amwas.
Keeping this story in past tense
I decided to change my life and get into a university.
In recent years, I learned something/studied every day, because I wanted to.
I feel like learning is one of the best things I can do, because it's the only thing that no one can take away from me.
Sometimes, what we hate is just something we haven’don't understooand yet.
Keeping the sentence in present tense
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Good job. Knowledge is power, as the saying goes.
July 8, 2025
Thank you! Yeah, it's true.
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It seemed worthless, felt like a burden. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It seemed worthless, (it / and) felt like a burden. I think it's a bit more natural to include another word with this pause. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My grades were bad, and I think my teachers believed I would become another homeless man in the town. My grades were bad, and I think my teachers believed I would become another homeless man in (the) town. "The" is optional here My grades were bad, and I think my teachers believed I would become just another homeless man in the town. The "just" adds a level of insignificance to your existence, which is what one might strive for in this sentence. |
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I feel like learning is one of the best things I can do, because it's the only thing that no one can take away from me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It seemed worthless, felt like burden. |
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My grades were bad, and I think my teachers thought I will be another homeless man in the town. |
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It was something I had to do for absolutely nothing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It was something I had to do for absolutely nothing in return. |
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I decided to change my life and get into a university. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I decided to change my life and get into "university" / "school" / "work" are sort of unusual words as they're also used as a sort of abstract place. And when you're not talking about a specific university, it's more natural to use them in the abstract place sense. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel like learning is one of the best thing I can do, because it's the only thing that no one can take away from me. |
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It was something I have to do for absolutely nothing. |
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